mfuqua23 Posted July 14, 2005 Report Share Posted July 14, 2005 Hip-Hop has been going strong for quite some time now. "It ain't gonna last." our parents would say. But here we are and there it is. Around us so much it is almost ridiculous. Hip-Hop has been from the dark area concrete streets to a tall fully lighted building with leather seats. It's been raw and real to fake appeal. It's been drama, it's been comical, it's been recognized, it's been dissed. Most of us know Hip-Hop's beginnings enuff to the point to respect it and understand it. So now, I ask of those of us who rap, MC, entertain, whatever U wanna call it; let's see your beginnings. I thought we could have fun discussions wit some old rhymes. Maybe U haven't started very long, it's still nice to look back. ------------------------------------------------------------------------------------ So now, I'd like to show my very 1st rhyme I ever wrote. Just one day in the summer I did it. I was listenin' to "Hit em High" and LL's part 'I make ya break ya ankles son, shake ya down' inspired my 1st song. I wrote a so-not-me intro then wrote the rhyme later. While writing this rhyme on whatever days, I think Diddy's 'Saga Continues' album gave me some ideas wit flow. I only have the typed version now... Broken Ankles Sept. 15, 2001 - Oct. 18, 2001 (finished earlier) I broke ya ankles Shook ya to the ground on ya knees There you are beggin' me no more please I got this n**** right where I want him on the ground When his face hit the pavement there wasn't even a sound I been ballin' since the age of 3 Y'all n****s should know, not to mess wit me And I control my game and how it's goin be Everybody is jealous of me I'm on top All them n****s got envy Will this s*** ever stop? (Echo) No... CHORUS Broken Ankles I'm bout to shake U down On my command, you'll fall to the ground Broken Ankles I hear a ccrrrack Oh man, what the hell was that? This is my game; my game, my game Can't take anything from my fame But you can be prepared So you don't be a scared I'm a tell ya what I'm bout to do So you can speak international for all them who think they can beat me Let's see... oui (means 'yes' in french) My handles can be as quick as a germ as slow as a worm My shots so hot they give the net a perm My hands, are as fast as lightning Everytime I play D it's frightening You don't know what I'm goin do or how or if I'm school you But after I do I rule you CHORUS May not be at my best all the time That's true But I can damn sure kick a rhyme That's true Matter fact, whatcha goin do Should I be a selfish n**** like you? Like Kurt Angle said It's true, it's true I rather be a me than a sorry you Rock Carolina every time I'm ballin' Sing Alicia Keys every time I'm fallin' Yo that flow was off the heasy After a while This s*** gets easy CHORUS - - - - - - - - - - - - - - So whatcha ya think? Do U have a flashback rhyme U'd like to share? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bigted Posted July 15, 2005 Report Share Posted July 15, 2005 This is my 1st ever song, I was trying to impress a girl in my high school, lol: "Playa-4-Life" Big Ted's 1st Rap Song Written During April 2000 Intro: Yo, yo, this joint goes out to y'all fly ladies Who are checking me out Big Ted's in the house Check it out y'all Verse One: Yo, baby boo What up with you I can see that ya want me too 'Cause you just screamed ooh Yo, check it, if you want, we could rendez-vous To my crib about one or two You know that Big Ted wants to bust a move Don't worry yo, I ain't gonna hurt you It's your choice But I can hear it in your voice You wanna ride on me like a cadillac or a royals-royce 'Cause Big Ted is turning you on No doubt, word is bond Shorty let's just get it on I ain't letting a dumb busta screw your dream That's why you need Big T-to the-E-to the D 'Cause this homie ain't a dream When it comes to the honeyz I'm never mean Yo, I'm the real deal like Evander Holyfield With my lyrical appeal No doubt, I'm keepin' it real This love won't be cheesy 'Cause this love will flow real easily Since Big Ted's a big time playa shorty Chorus: Yo, yo, I'm a playa-4-life I'm a playa-4-life Boo when we make love it'll last all night To all the playa-haters, I'll make y'all sick 'Cause I'll lyrically hurt ya quick As I'm droppin' another #1 hit Verse Two: I noticed at the club, I blew ya mind 'Cause you now think of me all the time You're telling me that u wanna wine and dine After I spitted this joint, you never heard anything that's hot like mine Big Ted has that hot lyrical design That ain't gonna stop until the end of time No other rapper will get the shine Shorty, let me take ya for a ride You see I'm styling right by ya side I'm turning you on, 'cause you're smiling When you see me rhyming Yo, there ain't any need to deny Give Big Ted a try I can see that look in ya eye Yo, like Blackstreet says: you want a fix I can hit it quick 'Cause you look dark and tasty like Twix Don't getit twisted, if you wanna roll We can take this slow And meet me after da show Teddy'll be in control 'Cause this is how the game flows Yo, we can do it in front of the whole crowd Or take it to the back of my truck with this beat real loud I know you'd like that Yo, maybe we could do more than chat Don't get it twisted, this could be more than tonight If you could keep it tight You don't have to worry aight Big Ted ain't the one to leave behind We don't need to fight Maybe you'll be my wife One day if you could hold down this playa-4-life Maybe when this rap tour is through I'll come holla back at you You're a fly honey that has class I ain't only trying to smash Yo, let's spend sometime And maybe I'll make you mine When y'all shorties are with Big Ted, I won't make ya pitty 'Cause my game's never s****y Just give Big Ted a try Destiny doesn't lie 'Cause we might be togetha 'till the end of time But for this moment...[chorus 3x] Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
mfuqua23 Posted July 15, 2005 Author Report Share Posted July 15, 2005 I don't know what your talkin' about. That was dope. I could totally hear that on the radio now. Even tho U was tryna get ya pimp game goin, U still had skills. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bigted Posted July 15, 2005 Report Share Posted July 15, 2005 I actually thought about this rhyme when I was listening to "Big Poppa"by Biggie, my style's a lil' bit more mature now, I do like that rhyme though, your rhyme's pretty cool too. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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