Mike Posted July 15, 2005 Report Share Posted July 15, 2005 (edited) The end of this is sexual and i know some of you wont like that. Im actually kinda nervous in posting it. i was just trying it out to see how i liked it in my rap. i didnt know what words were safe in the ending part so i just kept it safe. i even censored sucking. tell me how you like it. “Some Words” Written by Mike Petrow Im toxic like Britney spears Toxic like too many beers Im toxic like poison in your food I don’t mean to be rude, but its time to conclude Your life, if you can even call it one Im chargin up now so you better run It’s not games and it’s not fun You thinking im a crazy rapper but im aware I am Ready to do anything I want, like I was bam Which includes: knockin you out, slammin you down My punch goes around but never comes around Here’s my sound (Cuts) I got twice the flavor like double mint gum You want the old me back, like what have I become Famous, a jerk, I cop an attitude Sorry im a teen im supposed to be rude It’s what we do, it’s not like I do it for fun I don’t play with AK’s I got a cap gun (haha) Listen to me, 100 words a minute It’s like im gone listen, to the DJ spin it Before this I would be like “what to do” Sitting in my basement playing ps2 Put now I walk the street, with a particular beat Swag’s the word that they use for that Walkin, pick up the phone, (ring) “where you at?” Im the only new rapper without “lil” before his name Like im the only original cat to enter the game I spit fire you might get burned Put down that mic boy, just wait your turn And by the end of this maybe there’s something you’ll learn Some words of wisdom like keep your head up, stop your crying If you’re going for a dream you gotta keep on trying If you never stop tryin then you’ll never fall If you never try it wasn’t worth it at all Edited August 7, 2005 by WILL IS ILL Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
mfuqua23 Posted July 15, 2005 Report Share Posted July 15, 2005 Some Words is rights. "Im toxic like Britney spears Toxic like too many beers" - I know your just starting but I'd change the 2nd line to 'Leave U intoxicated like too many beers'. "I got twice the flavor like double mint gum" - that was a cute lil line. "Before this I would be like “what to do” Sitting in my basement playing ps2" - Lines that really brought out how such a song would come about. As long as ya havin' fun wit it, I see no problems. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Members Bracesup Posted July 15, 2005 Members Report Share Posted July 15, 2005 Im toxic like Britney spears:lolsign: :lolsign: He asks a slut for her number when she’s not even hot He said he’d knew he’d get he*d so he said why not He tells her “cherry, blueberry, take your pick” Hahahahaha!!!! It's been a long time since I laughed so hard. Nice one man. I like it. :2thumbs: Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
fan 4ever Posted July 15, 2005 Report Share Posted July 15, 2005 I like it man! No lie! Keep it up! It would be dope if we could hear some audio tho! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Da Brakes Posted July 15, 2005 Report Share Posted July 15, 2005 Again, some good stuff! Keep it coming! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fresh-Ta-Def Posted July 22, 2005 Report Share Posted July 22, 2005 I like the "toxic like britney spears" lines everything else need to be rearanged your kinda all over the place when you rap. 1. if this is yfor fun keep doing what your doing 2. if your serious then this is a scrap NO OFFENCE keep doing your thing Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Members Bracesup Posted July 24, 2005 Members Report Share Posted July 24, 2005 I like the "toxic like britney spears" lines everything else need to be rearanged your kinda all over the place when you rap. 1. if this is yfor fun keep doing what your doing 2. if your serious then this is a scrap NO OFFENCE keep doing your thing ← A friendly advice, my dear fellow forum member. I don't think picking on WillisIll and J-O-E was exactly a good idea. :lolsign: Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fresh-Ta-Def Posted July 24, 2005 Report Share Posted July 24, 2005 iono man haha Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mike Posted August 7, 2005 Author Report Share Posted August 7, 2005 i changed the lyrics on the last verse cause when iwas recording i played it backwards for the hell of it and it sounded like "hell" and "i love satan" so i got really freaked out. so i changed the last part. which i like it better now cause tthe title makes sense. oh and for my audios: there coming. very slowly tho. i got one song done hahah "not yet famous". i just learned how to make good beats. so wait a lil longer. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kbfprince Posted August 7, 2005 Report Share Posted August 7, 2005 Liked your last verse, didn't see what it was before you changed it, but it flowed really well better than your 1st verse. Itd be great to hear audio. :2thumbs: Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mike Posted December 14, 2005 Author Report Share Posted December 14, 2005 I CHANGES THE FIRST VERSE AND ITS ALOT BETTER!! my idea for this track is like you only remember some things from a stranger you met and forget the rest. so this song is like the some words you remember. the beat is gonna be a clock ticking. Clock is ticking remember some details like from a stranger you met The rest of the **** you seem to forget Words are poisonous Toxic like too many beers Toxic like Britney Spears Toxic like poison in your food I don’t mean to be rude, but its time to conclude Today’s rap it don’t shake your soul Like pop, hip hop, and rock and roll Blend ‘em together and start the trend Add emotion for a message to send It’s like people nowadays don’t know Where music came from, where music should go Started from spirit now it’s about bling Sex, drugs, money just about everything That can be taken the wrong way Weak weeks and strong days Face problems like how you face danger Be cautious, pay attention like a stranger But the brave are stupid, they jump the gun And the smart are weak so they turn and run Ask yourself which one are you If thrown in the situation what would you do? Risk yourself or watch what you do see Or end up safe but look like a pussy Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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