3cookies Posted July 26, 2005 Report Share Posted July 26, 2005 Lost ~ in a world of imagination, Found ~ in my mind, a deep clarification,... Undeniable addiction, dreaming over & over again of this wondeful touch, this warm gentle man... Sparking new interests in my soul intensifies my desire to become whole... Naturaly makes my creative juices just flow, Center of my universe, he's that everlasting glow... If I can only picture his face that I longingly wish 2 embrace... A soft gentle touch, my fingers grace upon his lips shoot electrifying movements to encompass my hips... A chemistry impossible to fake, One kiss is all it would take... to satisfy a thirst this man's created, suprisingly fascinated,... Lost~ time compressed & killed it yet rebuilt it, but just couldn't fade it... I fought and let go of it, Found ~ My heart reopened as it patiently waited, On a natural high... I feel so elated... Not knowing why or when, I would ever dream of him again... The feeling slowly hit me, in my eyes sits one amazing star He's a vision of beauty, I see drifting above and afar,... Smile sweeps across my heart, Here I am again...back at the start... Much deeper denial, as I can never admit it, To a man already committed... to a single life, no desire of gaining a wife... what have u done 2 me, ...my mind can only ask, to speak these words are too much of a task... Lost ~ This man will never imagine... that if Found ~ wonderful nontheless, he could easily complete my vision... peace, cookie Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fresh-Ta-Def Posted July 26, 2005 Report Share Posted July 26, 2005 damn girl you got some skill keep doing your thing do you have a microphone? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Da Brakes Posted July 26, 2005 Report Share Posted July 26, 2005 I'm really liking that! great stuff! :2thumbs: Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Members Snouf Posted July 26, 2005 Members Report Share Posted July 26, 2005 Sounds more like a poetry to me. But a good poetry for sure! :1-say-yes: I like it because I'm in love too and I can identify with this stuff now. Even though I'm a man :wink: Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
PeaceAngel Posted July 27, 2005 Report Share Posted July 27, 2005 I love that!! It really does sound like poetry but it's great! Great choice of words and how they flow together, it's amazing!! :2thumbs: Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bigted Posted July 27, 2005 Report Share Posted July 27, 2005 That's a deep poem! :1-say-yes: Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
KevTastic Posted July 27, 2005 Report Share Posted July 27, 2005 Very deep cookie. Great stuff Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
3cookies Posted July 27, 2005 Author Report Share Posted July 27, 2005 :2thumbs: Thanks guys. It is a poem. I'm not in love tho,... just a reflection of how ppl can impact on us in a positive way, (never forget them) it can trigger a 'spur of the moment' of creativity... (Mos Def not an x ) I was typin as it came 2 me... peace, cookie Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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