Members willsmithfan1 Posted July 26, 2005 Members Report Share Posted July 26, 2005 Hey, I wrote some lyrics..poem today. Got the inspiration from Bow Wow's track Let Me Hold U. Decided to wrote how a guy treats a girl and then splits up. Let me know what you think and advice is always appreciated. Held Me Down It all began when I found the right one Was in the chillin in the mall U gave me your number and said give me a call U said “Let me introduce to my world Wanna do u right cuz u a beautiful girl” So I went home & picked up the phone He asked me if I’m all alone He told me to come to his crib I’ll never forget everything we did Next day we balled at the mall You were the best never let me fall We were like best friends I thought you’ll be with till the end There were no secrets, no pain, nobody playin games My whole life had changed and rearranged to an exchange My mother told me I was doing wrong I explained to her how to kept me strong Even your boyz thought you blowin me for dough But they don’t understand the things we know Next day it felt like fate Got close together and had our 1st date I told him he’s the one that I can trust And our love will never crust U kept me on the right track Were always there 4 me when I needed your back I knew you I would always do right As long as you’re right there on my side We flashed to your crib we chilled inside, We spent some time in your ride Days got harder as they flew Times & memories together always blew Day after day we went our separate ways Never came back to the same place We both drifted apart Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mike Posted July 27, 2005 Report Share Posted July 27, 2005 (edited) excellent rhyme. :2thumbs: you seem to be getting better, and it shows here keep up the good work!! Edited July 27, 2005 by WILL IS ILL Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
PeaceAngel Posted July 27, 2005 Report Share Posted July 27, 2005 That has a great flow! I like it! :2thumbs: Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fresh-Ta-Def Posted July 27, 2005 Report Share Posted July 27, 2005 nice man good job on this Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Members willsmithfan1 Posted July 27, 2005 Author Members Report Share Posted July 27, 2005 excellent rhyme. :2thumbs: you seem to be getting better, and it shows here keep up the good work!! ← Yeah, who knew in a week I could get better. Thanks everybody. If it's that good, I might turn it into a audio track once I get a mic sorted. Thanks again for the feedback. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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