kbfprince Posted July 28, 2005 Report Share Posted July 28, 2005 (edited) Hey guys, wrote this today, just wanting some feedback on it. Thanks. Lyrical Trip -KBF Chorus: It’s me, KB back on this lyrical trip Without bombs, guns or any other miracle whips Hatin what I see coming outta influential lips Lines so wack it would make a 10 story building flip So when these wack rappers ask my opinion Blowing them off is a routine decision I feel wack rhymers ain’t worth my time Better sit and write my rhymes. deaf ear, eyes blind Beefs started, rappers aren’t motivated to win Spit a couple lines just waiting for it to end When they’re on the front page suddenly it’s halted Sell a couple K’s and then they bolted Publicity stunt! What happened to the days MC’s battling each other, dope verses without pay Any money was welcome, green was appreciated Now young bucks spend tons with wallets inflated Egos inflated, but not giving any props To the old skool cops who were still at the top Til fads raided the top with their gun pops Destroying young minds and destroying young crop Haters were polluting mainstream with dirty shots And then there began the downfall of hip hop Ask yourself, does your rhyme make you think? Does your rhyme keep you wondering or does it just sink? K-B-F coming at you on this lyrical trip Ripping rhymes, changing time in this miracle shift Chorus (2x) Freedom of speech, either true or false Deceiving millions, leaving a loop-hole in the laws We can rap, write smack, everything gets attacked Record labels, hot tracks, but still no one’s got our backs Some don’t recognize that this business is tough First night of emceing leaves you thinking that’s enough Everywhere you go rappers try and climb their way up Probability shows most of ‘em are outta their luck Picture this if you will, with everything you’ve dealt with, a meeting with the head of a label in your belt Waiting, wishing for that producer’s call home Sitting next to the phone, hours later you’re still home alone Finally give up, feel the sting of the slap You weren’t good enough to deserve a damn call back If anything, that would just make you stronger Feeling vibes, hypnotized to stay in the game longer F*** those producers, I can just make mine With a pen, pad and mic that’s probably worth a couple dimes Writing more story lines ignoring the time There’s no time to relax just to get by And then you realized you’ve given up everything you had For a lousy 5 bucks a CD, 5 bucks an ad By that time you know there’s no turning back Gave your all to the game, but it didn’t give you jack Your fate is the same as those enslaved blacks Out in the cold waiting before your skull finally cracked See, think hard before you follow the rap track Make no mistake one little slip will get you laughed at Chorus Edited July 28, 2005 by kbfprince Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fresh-Ta-Def Posted July 28, 2005 Report Share Posted July 28, 2005 pretty good man keep working on it i like the line in the chorus "It’s me, KB back on this lyrical trip Without bombs, guns or any other miracle whips" Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
3cookies Posted July 28, 2005 Report Share Posted July 28, 2005 (edited) I couldn't read the whole thing, cuz my comp seems to want 2 freeze...but one line --->> Hatin what I see coming outta influential lips .. believe it or not...this reminds me of one small positive twyst Pep Love brings when he speaks about politicians in "Oh My God" ... :2thumbs: peace, cookie Edited July 28, 2005 by 3cookies Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kbfprince Posted July 28, 2005 Author Report Share Posted July 28, 2005 Thanks guys. I made this into audio, and it sound pretty good. Best flow I've had in a long time. LOL. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
mfuqua23 Posted July 28, 2005 Report Share Posted July 28, 2005 Magnifico. Every part of this song was right on and dope all way around. Definately let this audio go up so we can hear it. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kbfprince Posted July 28, 2005 Author Report Share Posted July 28, 2005 (edited) Thanks, FuQ. Never mind about audio, soundclick's down. Edited July 29, 2005 by kbfprince Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lerkot Posted July 29, 2005 Report Share Posted July 29, 2005 Queen Latifah 2! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
mfuqua23 Posted July 29, 2005 Report Share Posted July 29, 2005 Well, still give us a link when it's all up and ready. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
PeaceAngel Posted July 29, 2005 Report Share Posted July 29, 2005 (edited) Those were some great rhymes! :2thumbs: edit: 700th post :wiggle: Edited July 29, 2005 by FuNkY.FrEsH.ChIcK Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fresh-Ta-Def Posted July 30, 2005 Report Share Posted July 30, 2005 yeah man put it up on soundclick when u straight Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kbfprince Posted August 1, 2005 Author Report Share Posted August 1, 2005 Haha ,yeah thanks guys. I'm at my uncle's house and I'm about 2 go to church. I'll probably record it again tuesday or so cause I've been listening to the song on ipod and there are things i wanna change. So yeah, ill get it up soon. Later Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
mfuqua23 Posted August 5, 2005 Report Share Posted August 5, 2005 Yo, I found your page and check out both tracks. I thought it was funny that we used the instrumental for songs around the same time recorded. Lyrical Trip - U got the right voice for it. It's very much on. You just need more attitude and be a bit better rhythmically in sync with the beat. Other than that, no compliants. Female MC - Same advice with the other one. Also rap louder and keep ya voice up at a level. I definately like what I hear. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Members Bracesup Posted August 5, 2005 Members Report Share Posted August 5, 2005 So I got to your page too by searching for the obvious 'KBF' :haha: after visiting Fuqs soundclick page, and you were really good at rapping too. But I cannot believe your accent is so damn strong, especially in Lyrical Trip. I'm really not used to this much strong accent. :lolsign: Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kbfprince Posted August 5, 2005 Author Report Share Posted August 5, 2005 LOL. Thanks 4 the comments. I needa new mic though, I just don't have the money yet. Yeah I guess living in asia for 2 years will do that to a persons voice, but it's weird because I don't hear an accent when I talk normally. Thanks. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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