kbfprince Posted August 6, 2005 Report Share Posted August 6, 2005 (edited) Hey yall new song I started a couple days ago and just finished tonight. Let me know what you think. :pony: U Wanna Keep Down - KBF Well yes, no doubt Artists are washed-out Rap facing a lockout Turn to the new standout Some have falling-outs Not this lyrical bout Not this lyrical route Hip Hop’s what I’m about B-ball was first with the 3-peat Lakers Had no handles so later switched my love to paper I can, rock the bells, too hard to be taken Chuck D helped me awaken to this world of debating Hip Hop and politics never ran together until PE Dropped Yo Bum Rush and ever since the 1980's Pens have been racing to make it big in the league Where the bigger you are the more you seem to achieve Like baseball on steroids, some raps drone like droids Rhyme lines gotta have a reunion like Pink Floyd’s Lines gotta flow right, have the content to satisfy Congress ratified the growing suspicion, I’m real fly Not bad 4 1 3, not following the wrong themes Doing it my way, all for me, somebody scream Yeah, I like how we do it in the old skool With the old skool fools having lyrical duels You can’t claim I’m criminal, Bush did kill all our people Over war was not intentional, but this rhyme is subliminal If I did destroy hip hop, I wouldn’t have stopped Til y’all were in shock at this lyrical hop Lyrical, lyrical, I’m the lyrical miracle They fear and cower cause my raps are spherical Dope all around, I rock your world and I’m invincible This is easy convincing y’all I rhyme for my principles And ya can’t doubt me now, the crowds I can wow Abilities showing like a smile you wanna keep down Things ain’t bright, Ronny needs his heart right (Ronny pronounced “Row-Knee”) Operations take time, recover’s a bigger plight Know that if you ever try to pull the trigger On yourself or your rhymes, just dig a little deeper Nothing’s worth having if its not worth a fight I’ll excite you, I might, not black or white Custard’s not popular, nor do they slight Us, some say words do make up your life YOUR words, so don’t give up easily in a heist Saw this woman on TV, got freaky, what a bitch B Slept with a 1 3 year old had his kids, Je-sus The word lust with underage will keep you from being free You can’t keep deny it stop trying it, you staying with me? When you’re compared to a twig, then drive a big rig There’s something behind the wig, like there’s a zag to a zig And ya can’t doubt me now, the crowds I can wow Abilities showing like a smile you wanna keep down In mid-field I kick it In the rink I stick it Blame yourself for missing it Could’ve seen a poet ripping it But sometimes I just can’t rhyme, I just can’t flow Blank as a White House without the president’s gold Can’t make rhymes up, can’t critique them soundly Mentally feel fed up and like a sentencing, lonely Writer’s block, like we’ve all hit the wall Either bounce back up or sit back and take the fall They say you’ve run outta ideas, you rap for kids More of a pop rapper than I have ever witnessed Well damn, Will Smith don’t need to cuss to sell records I don’t need to lie and be hectic ‘cause I’m dope best believe it I’ll take you to the Candy Shop, what a classic you’re creating For the mommas tryna sucka a kid into behaving Your rap could use a sedative, don’t try to be so sensitive Sleep, don’t come back its imperative, you’re like a fat relative My rhymes can be described by any positive adjective Your lines from a lyric generator with the same old sh*t to give You gotta feel me because my rhymes can’t miss Like Kobe’s 12 threes, all you can hear is swish And I’m out. Edited August 8, 2005 by kbfprince Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
J-o-e Posted August 6, 2005 Report Share Posted August 6, 2005 Nice Flow. Good Rhyme Technique. Keep it up!!!! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
mfuqua23 Posted August 6, 2005 Report Share Posted August 6, 2005 Astoundingly Perfect. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
PeaceAngel Posted August 6, 2005 Report Share Posted August 6, 2005 Wow, that was amazing!! Those were some great rhymes! I love how you have a good choice of words that just flow together so well. This would make a great audio. Great job!! :2thumbs: Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Members Bracesup Posted August 6, 2005 Members Report Share Posted August 6, 2005 I have to tell you, that rhyme was totally amazing. :2thumbs: Excellent skill you've got there. :respect: Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kbfprince Posted August 6, 2005 Author Report Share Posted August 6, 2005 Thanks 4 the comments guys. I might make this into audio next week or so, depends if I find a good beat/instrumental. Anyone else? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fresh-Ta-Def Posted August 7, 2005 Report Share Posted August 7, 2005 yeah man its cool make it into audio ill check it out fa'sho Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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