J-o-e Posted August 8, 2005 Report Share Posted August 8, 2005 Yo Peeps Was Happenin', Thought I'd drop these lyrics by to see what ya'll thought. Feed back is appreichated. Thanks ------------------ Listen To The Wind (Freestyle) ------------------ Listen to the wind as I rewind this track back up whack But not straight like that how the hell did he do that? Girl we met ages ago and our egos must of collided But I never ran and I never hided close my eyelids And go into a perfect picture of what’s supposed to be How did he get here? Why the hell does he MC My backs against the wall and I cant think straight. Someone come and help me. I have to shift this weight But that’s not going to happen from rapping. Anytime soon He said “Call me at noon” But I’m going rain like a monsoon Do the **** probability and reinvent the earth. Since birth I swear to god I never meant to curse. Even in this verse But them mother****ing crosskicking haters in my way Get out ya’ll the obstacles getting my pay day Listen to the wind keep it clear and minds always sober No smoking no drinking keep thinking. Of a cobra The strength that they attack thinking that that’s what? Homie it’s a fact that a gat ain’t going to respond to that. You can’t beat the way I put the mic down since underground I wish that I went double platinum at least like my sound But some say I’m the similar to Pac and a little bit of Kano So here we go no one judge me because that’s how I roll. Joe I’m sitting in the club and no ladies want to approach me Come any closer then I have no objection to toast you…. Walk up to me and try to battle me. You’ll get soo destroyed You have all been fooled by my lyrical wit. Getting you annoyed Some say I have no brain with no name. So how am I sane? But it’s a shame that MC’s are lame. Its just only a game Listening to Jay saying he had to make the song cry So tell me why did 2pac and B.I.G and to make the song die? Up early morning so I could get my hustle on Yeah I sold a bit of drugs. But money was there how could I go wrong? I don’t remember the old school. Probably because I was just born But love can hurt so much. Teenage girls wanting to do soft porn Freestyling can hurt. But wanksters don’t know **** about me But they think they big enough to stand and shout at me What I do say? Back up talk not spit. didn’t need the weather Haters I’ll never need them. Never. But rap wont be the same without them together……yeah ----------------------------------- Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
mfuqua23 Posted August 8, 2005 Report Share Posted August 8, 2005 There was a lot of wordplay, which is good. It was just raw. Nice freestyle Joe Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Members Bracesup Posted August 10, 2005 Members Report Share Posted August 10, 2005 Up early morning so I could get my hustle on Yeah I sold a bit of drugs. But money was there how could I go wrong? I don’t remember the old school. Probably because I was just born But love can hurt so much. Teenage girls wanting to do soft porn I'm hoping that it's just for the lyrical sake. :ponder: Other than that, those were really nice rhymes there. Like Michael said, lots of nice wordplay you did there. :dope: Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
J-o-e Posted August 10, 2005 Author Report Share Posted August 10, 2005 Thanks for the review guys. Anybody else? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
PeaceAngel Posted August 10, 2005 Report Share Posted August 10, 2005 That was really good! Great choice of words in there! :dope: Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kbfprince Posted August 10, 2005 Report Share Posted August 10, 2005 Great wordplay & the rhymes were nice. Great freestyle :dope: Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fresh-Ta-Def Posted August 11, 2005 Report Share Posted August 11, 2005 good job on that man its got good flow but i doubt its a freestyle Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
mfuqua23 Posted August 11, 2005 Report Share Posted August 11, 2005 Like Michael said, lots of nice wordplay you did there. :dope: ← Uh, why are U addressing me by name like that? Is this all to get back at me for my innocent remark of well U know? (it's okay to recognizes faces of the entertainment industry) Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Members Bracesup Posted August 11, 2005 Members Report Share Posted August 11, 2005 Like Michael said, lots of nice wordplay you did there. :dope: ← Uh, why are U addressing me by name like that? Is this all to get back at me for my innocent remark of well U know? (it's okay to recognizes faces of the entertainment industry) ← Okay then, I'll start referring to you as "FuQ" as you want to be known. :lolsign: :lolsign: :lolsign: But seriously homie, I really feel that Michael is a much better name to call you as than an abbreviation that's always going to sound an as insult. What do you say? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
J-o-e Posted August 11, 2005 Author Report Share Posted August 11, 2005 I dont think Michael is a bad name Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Da Brakes Posted August 11, 2005 Report Share Posted August 11, 2005 it aint a bad thing. Alot of us on the board refer to each other by there real name! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
mfuqua23 Posted August 11, 2005 Report Share Posted August 11, 2005 Well aight. I thought U were just being funny. We cool. (i would put up a smilie but I've got to learn 'em all over again) Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
WesSyde Posted August 11, 2005 Report Share Posted August 11, 2005 yeah Michael is my brothers name so it's all good. random smiley: :ninja: Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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