Fresh-Ta-Def Posted August 16, 2005 Report Share Posted August 16, 2005 (edited) i lay down to sleep, with my head on my pillow body under my sheets, crying i just can't get- no sleep anymore, up all night, thinking what i did wrong but aint nothing right since i made this poem now my minds, filled up with emotions just wishing theres a way to fix it, some kind of potion sit by the ocean, smoothing sounds an waves but my lifes been getting worse from day to day aint no way i can fix it all by my self got me a scyatress and a counclier just to try an help but everyday comes something new, and painfull back in court that day i swore i would take full consiquences for my actions and the stuff i did but then i lied anyway, "i neva stole from the kid" i hope god forgives me for all my sins cause i've done so much now its all but to hurt mah bloodstains on my white tee, and my iverson jersey money coming in from folks i dont know an my homies say i just wanna help you man you my bro but in actuality i just wanna be alone sit by myself an die in this unhappy home..... Edited August 16, 2005 by Fresh-Ta-Def Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kbfprince Posted August 17, 2005 Report Share Posted August 17, 2005 Great emotions, i love ur poems. :dope: somethin that happened to you? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fresh-Ta-Def Posted August 18, 2005 Author Report Share Posted August 18, 2005 yep everything i wright has real life situations that have gone on in my life thanks for the feed Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
PeaceAngel Posted August 18, 2005 Report Share Posted August 18, 2005 Wow, that was really emotional man. It's good to write out your feelings instead of keeping them bottled up inside of you. Great job on the poem! :dope: Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fresh-Ta-Def Posted August 19, 2005 Author Report Share Posted August 19, 2005 thanks funky fresh Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
J-o-e Posted August 21, 2005 Report Share Posted August 21, 2005 Thats good. Keep it up! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fresh-Ta-Def Posted August 22, 2005 Author Report Share Posted August 22, 2005 thanks J-O-E Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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