Changing The Script

[bigted]

What's Up Y'all, I was going through my book of rhymes and found this poem I wrote about how wack the commercial hip-hop scene is now:

Changing The Script

Poem written on May 14, 2004

When I listen to the radio these days

It becomes a depressing drag

Because a lot of music on it is full of distaste

There are cats who are just spitting to brag

And that's not a cool display

That's why the music is getting a stereotype tag

This music is such a disgrace

So somebody has to start changing the script

Is creativity something that still breathes?

The originality is just rarely seen

You have to wear name brands

In order to be on the scene

It's such a demand

When you don't have that much money

It leaves you sad

Especially when you get lonely

I know you want to change

Those words in your pad

But you're too worried about selling C.D's

So you keep on rolling

With what you had

To me that gets boring

Because you said the same thing in the past

You do tour performances

But that doesn't make you a man

If you go by the same script

You'll ultimately finish last

So enjoy your moment

Because soon your career will be the past

Unless you start changing the script

[PeaceAngel]

That was really good man, and it's so true. Good job on that! :dope:

[Fresh-Ta-Def]

nice rhyme there man so true big upps keep doin ya thang

[bigted]

Thanks for the love! :dope:

[Turntable]

I like it..Good Job!