Rate this #3 1-10

[markwinfield1]

These cats speaking they mind/

Thats ok,This rap game is soon to be mine/

I'll meet you at your your favorite spot we can wine&dine/

Your welcome any time you ready/

Make shure you go see nurse betty/

I'm getting better this stuff just takes time/

Always at war but i leave no real MC's behind/

Now is not the time die/

Dudes dropping off they garbage/

I'm somewere hideing be ready for my carnage/

Careless peaple they'll leave you to die/

They'll sit on they azz and ask why/

Peaple that have never done anything meaningful or deserving they want a piece of the pie/

Not a hot 16/

But always i'm always need of a $1.15/

I'm solo i can't afford be dragged behind by a team/

I got no time for BS/

I got no need for the stress/

I save my stress for the best/

Wear a vest/

I don't F-up your chest/

Its short but i hope better than my last two

Edited August 28, 2005 by markwinfield1

[J-o-e]

Thats a bit better but still needs improvement

Here's mine:

If you think your going to try and take the rap game

But the embarresment will happenin, the slap shame

Your pathetic. It's crazy because homie I know this

I dissed you once. I think by now you would of got the gyst

To battle you just need talent and think what words to say

Bend down on your knees and pray. Because I'm not going away

I geuss that your that man in the mirror. Trying to look clean

Your a loner and a loser. No wonder why you don't have a team

So please don't read this as a rap. Just only a letter

You don't understand me beating you. Shall make you better

Be patient and the same will come to you. F*ck Me? F*ck u 2

I'm so quick i've already beat you and you didn't have a clue

Your feeling blue. You want out don't you? You just make me laugh

Your dirty homie make sure that you can afford a bath

With that 1.15 but beating me will be a long life dream

You might just won't day. Things ain't always what they seem

Think of a flow that you know. Don't concentrate in stealing the show

When sh*t hits the fan make sure you know when to go

Speak what's on your mind. Yeah nothing wrong with that

I'm a pitbull and homie your nothing but a pussy cat

Going to be high in this game. However much that its worth

It's been my dream since birth to try to rhyme without thinkin of a verse

Don't get anoyed. I am only telling the truth. To the youth

I'm only 17 but you really need to grow up. Take a busted tooth?

Stand up to what ya believe in and homie you can do anything

Even with a minithin you can be so good that you can actually sing

So those who took this long journey all the way home. Who's alone

Mark because he's the one waiting for phone to ring. In his own zone

Trying to get better but all know that isn't going to work

The only way you can get love from this game is if you hurt.

Ps. 6/10 and just kiddin wit the rhyme

[markwinfield1]

Thats a bit better but still needs improvement

Here's mine:

If you think your going to try and take the rap game

But the embarresment will happenin, the slap shame

Your pathetic. It's crazy because homie I know this

I dissed you once. I think by now you would of got the gyst

To battle you just need talent and think what words to say

Bend down on your knees and pray. Because I'm not going away

I geuss that your that man in the mirror. Trying to look clean

Your a loner and a loser. No wonder why you don't have a team

So please don't read this as a rap. Just only a letter

You don't understand me beating you. Shall make you better

Be patient and the same will come to you. F*ck Me? F*ck u 2

I'm so quick i've already beat you and you didn't have a clue

Your feeling blue. You want out don't you? You just make me laugh

Your dirty homie make sure that you can afford a bath

With that 1.15 but beating me will be a long life dream

You might just won't day. Things ain't always what they seem

Think of a flow that you know. Don't concentrate in stealing the show

When sh*t hits the fan make sure you know when to go

Speak what's on your mind. Yeah nothing wrong with that

I'm a pitbull and homie your nothing but a pussy cat

Going to be high in this game. However much that its worth

It's been my dream since birth to try to rhyme without thinkin of a verse

Don't get anoyed. I am only telling the truth. To the youth

I'm only 17 but you really need to grow up. Take a busted tooth?

Stand up to what ya believe in and homie you can do anything

Even with a minithin you can be so good that you can actually sing

So those who took this long journey all the way home. Who's alone

Mark because he's the one waiting for phone to ring. In his own zone

Trying to get better but all know that isn't going to work

The only way you can get love from this game is if you hurt.

Ps. 6/10 and just kiddin wit the rhyme

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I'm not much of a battle rapper but i'll respond soon!

[J-o-e]

Looking forward to it :lolsign:

Edited August 29, 2005 by J-o-e

[markwinfield1]

Looking forward to it  :lolsign:

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Heres 1

Rappers cooking up these flops/

Like fly they slowly start to drop yo/

Like Kanye i get on the micthe just go go go/

Don't play snow yo its kinda cold yo/

Don't think to hard your brain gonna start to mold yo/

Shut your mouth and just flow yo/

Don't take to long to long thinking you need to watch your hoe yo/

Man i'm sorry for this major blow yo/

Sorry for taking 2 days to respond yo but i was stackin dough/

Like the energizer bunny i'm i keep coming&coming/

I have these vets like damn he gonna bust out with something big yo/

Mic check/

Mic wreck/

My rhymes all upper deck yo/

I was lookin at your rhymes and i was like what the hell was that/

Don't evan think about stepin up to bat yo/

I'll make to tap on the mat yo/

Theres a small freestyle it took me a minute tommorrow i'll have another freestyle

[kbfprince]

i wanna join in. for fun :davidblaine: lil freestyle

Mikes actin like he has it all but he just got bossed

By Joe and now Im ready to join in the cause

Katrina be hittin New orleans hard right in the heart

Harder than ur words impacted anyone that's a start

Bored of your rhymes why dont u just give up

Comteplatin, forget it yall not ready for competition pup

Ya gettin schooled in the game that you play

If this was ball ya ankles be crossed like the x next to the ray

I thought you wanted to learn but you be dissin cats like its your turn

To burn money cause ya so rich you got the honeys on a sojourn

Ya got luck? stuff it wit your so called skill on the mic

I think Mikes comin prepared wit a write

And ya don't even freestyle if it took ya that long

Bet you dont even have paper you just wanna belong

Like ya part of the throng, but you got it backwards kid

Everyone else got jobs ya wastin time doin hat trickks

And its a shame, we could use you in the game

As a target we can get u framed in the wall of the deranged

Whats up wit the engergizer bunny, ya too in love wit fresh prince homey

Studyin line by line to hear his voice look betwen ur legs say im coming

Better keep ya wet dreams out of ya rhymes kid

Ya already queer enough as it is

[kbfprince]

I just realised i put MIKE instead of MARK. haha sorry.

[J-o-e]

Still good, My turn

Ladies and gents tell me how many times this dude said Yo

It sorted of reminds me of that song that always screams "O"

You're pathetic but you just know it. Now who can flow it?

Grab the mic have a beat and just freestyle the show to it?

You see I killed you without you even saying a word

that KBF came in and rocked your world, face to the curb

Mess with me and then im not impressed. So just shut it up

How many times i gotta tell ya'll? That i just had to rip it up

I geuss your the bunny you havent been promoted to magican

Homie me starting and finishing battles is just like tradition

I geuss your the type of rapper who wants to be a "Golddigger"

do you ever have the balls to pull the trigger? I geuss ill just figure

Try and swing then i'll just duck. I think i might give you advice

don't care about ice just what the hell you say. you're hairs disgusting u got lice

why hate me when the only reason you hate is because i hated you first

dont try and beat me because i've already done it. don't make it worst