markwinfield1 Posted August 28, 2005 Report Share Posted August 28, 2005 (edited) These cats speaking they mind/ Thats ok,This rap game is soon to be mine/ I'll meet you at your your favorite spot we can wine&dine/ Your welcome any time you ready/ Make shure you go see nurse betty/ I'm getting better this stuff just takes time/ Always at war but i leave no real MC's behind/ Now is not the time die/ Dudes dropping off they garbage/ I'm somewere hideing be ready for my carnage/ Careless peaple they'll leave you to die/ They'll sit on they azz and ask why/ Peaple that have never done anything meaningful or deserving they want a piece of the pie/ Not a hot 16/ But always i'm always need of a $1.15/ I'm solo i can't afford be dragged behind by a team/ I got no time for BS/ I got no need for the stress/ I save my stress for the best/ Wear a vest/ I don't F-up your chest/ Its short but i hope better than my last two Edited August 28, 2005 by markwinfield1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
J-o-e Posted August 29, 2005 Report Share Posted August 29, 2005 Thats a bit better but still needs improvement Here's mine: If you think your going to try and take the rap game But the embarresment will happenin, the slap shame Your pathetic. It's crazy because homie I know this I dissed you once. I think by now you would of got the gyst To battle you just need talent and think what words to say Bend down on your knees and pray. Because I'm not going away I geuss that your that man in the mirror. Trying to look clean Your a loner and a loser. No wonder why you don't have a team So please don't read this as a rap. Just only a letter You don't understand me beating you. Shall make you better Be patient and the same will come to you. F*ck Me? F*ck u 2 I'm so quick i've already beat you and you didn't have a clue Your feeling blue. You want out don't you? You just make me laugh Your dirty homie make sure that you can afford a bath With that 1.15 but beating me will be a long life dream You might just won't day. Things ain't always what they seem Think of a flow that you know. Don't concentrate in stealing the show When sh*t hits the fan make sure you know when to go Speak what's on your mind. Yeah nothing wrong with that I'm a pitbull and homie your nothing but a pussy cat Going to be high in this game. However much that its worth It's been my dream since birth to try to rhyme without thinkin of a verse Don't get anoyed. I am only telling the truth. To the youth I'm only 17 but you really need to grow up. Take a busted tooth? Stand up to what ya believe in and homie you can do anything Even with a minithin you can be so good that you can actually sing So those who took this long journey all the way home. Who's alone Mark because he's the one waiting for phone to ring. In his own zone Trying to get better but all know that isn't going to work The only way you can get love from this game is if you hurt. Ps. 6/10 and just kiddin wit the rhyme Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
markwinfield1 Posted August 29, 2005 Author Report Share Posted August 29, 2005 Thats a bit better but still needs improvement Here's mine: If you think your going to try and take the rap game But the embarresment will happenin, the slap shame Your pathetic. It's crazy because homie I know this I dissed you once. I think by now you would of got the gyst To battle you just need talent and think what words to say Bend down on your knees and pray. Because I'm not going away I geuss that your that man in the mirror. Trying to look clean Your a loner and a loser. No wonder why you don't have a team So please don't read this as a rap. Just only a letter You don't understand me beating you. Shall make you better Be patient and the same will come to you. F*ck Me? F*ck u 2 I'm so quick i've already beat you and you didn't have a clue Your feeling blue. You want out don't you? You just make me laugh Your dirty homie make sure that you can afford a bath With that 1.15 but beating me will be a long life dream You might just won't day. Things ain't always what they seem Think of a flow that you know. Don't concentrate in stealing the show When sh*t hits the fan make sure you know when to go Speak what's on your mind. Yeah nothing wrong with that I'm a pitbull and homie your nothing but a pussy cat Going to be high in this game. However much that its worth It's been my dream since birth to try to rhyme without thinkin of a verse Don't get anoyed. I am only telling the truth. To the youth I'm only 17 but you really need to grow up. Take a busted tooth? Stand up to what ya believe in and homie you can do anything Even with a minithin you can be so good that you can actually sing So those who took this long journey all the way home. Who's alone Mark because he's the one waiting for phone to ring. In his own zone Trying to get better but all know that isn't going to work The only way you can get love from this game is if you hurt. Ps. 6/10 and just kiddin wit the rhyme ← I'm not much of a battle rapper but i'll respond soon! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
J-o-e Posted August 29, 2005 Report Share Posted August 29, 2005 (edited) Looking forward to it :lolsign: Edited August 29, 2005 by J-o-e Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
markwinfield1 Posted September 2, 2005 Author Report Share Posted September 2, 2005 Looking forward to it :lolsign: ← Heres 1 Rappers cooking up these flops/ Like fly they slowly start to drop yo/ Like Kanye i get on the micthe just go go go/ Don't play snow yo its kinda cold yo/ Don't think to hard your brain gonna start to mold yo/ Shut your mouth and just flow yo/ Don't take to long to long thinking you need to watch your hoe yo/ Man i'm sorry for this major blow yo/ Sorry for taking 2 days to respond yo but i was stackin dough/ Like the energizer bunny i'm i keep coming&coming/ I have these vets like damn he gonna bust out with something big yo/ Mic check/ Mic wreck/ My rhymes all upper deck yo/ I was lookin at your rhymes and i was like what the hell was that/ Don't evan think about stepin up to bat yo/ I'll make to tap on the mat yo/ Theres a small freestyle it took me a minute tommorrow i'll have another freestyle Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kbfprince Posted September 2, 2005 Report Share Posted September 2, 2005 i wanna join in. for fun :davidblaine: lil freestyle Mikes actin like he has it all but he just got bossed By Joe and now Im ready to join in the cause Katrina be hittin New orleans hard right in the heart Harder than ur words impacted anyone that's a start Bored of your rhymes why dont u just give up Comteplatin, forget it yall not ready for competition pup Ya gettin schooled in the game that you play If this was ball ya ankles be crossed like the x next to the ray I thought you wanted to learn but you be dissin cats like its your turn To burn money cause ya so rich you got the honeys on a sojourn Ya got luck? stuff it wit your so called skill on the mic I think Mikes comin prepared wit a write And ya don't even freestyle if it took ya that long Bet you dont even have paper you just wanna belong Like ya part of the throng, but you got it backwards kid Everyone else got jobs ya wastin time doin hat trickks And its a shame, we could use you in the game As a target we can get u framed in the wall of the deranged Whats up wit the engergizer bunny, ya too in love wit fresh prince homey Studyin line by line to hear his voice look betwen ur legs say im coming Better keep ya wet dreams out of ya rhymes kid Ya already queer enough as it is Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kbfprince Posted September 2, 2005 Report Share Posted September 2, 2005 I just realised i put MIKE instead of MARK. haha sorry. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
J-o-e Posted September 2, 2005 Report Share Posted September 2, 2005 Still good, My turn Ladies and gents tell me how many times this dude said Yo It sorted of reminds me of that song that always screams "O" You're pathetic but you just know it. Now who can flow it? Grab the mic have a beat and just freestyle the show to it? You see I killed you without you even saying a word that KBF came in and rocked your world, face to the curb Mess with me and then im not impressed. So just shut it up How many times i gotta tell ya'll? That i just had to rip it up I geuss your the bunny you havent been promoted to magican Homie me starting and finishing battles is just like tradition I geuss your the type of rapper who wants to be a "Golddigger" do you ever have the balls to pull the trigger? I geuss ill just figure Try and swing then i'll just duck. I think i might give you advice don't care about ice just what the hell you say. you're hairs disgusting u got lice why hate me when the only reason you hate is because i hated you first dont try and beat me because i've already done it. don't make it worst Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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