Paying around with a new style

[Schnazz]

I was playing around with a new style (to me) that I bit off of, well, any modern rapper. The rhyme and the content where just off the top of my head, so not that great, but I wanted to try something different then what I had been doing. What do ya'll think?

We all are discussen the things that are disgusten

All the different stuff that our government's been busten

Nothen ... that's what folks be seemen it's meanen

Our intelligent word and slurs, now boards are teamen

With teens, twentys, thirties, and forties

The culture of today, ain't ok, with sippen forties

We'd rather talk about the real sound going down

Around the political cultures of our town, we all frown

Arguing over who messed up worse, causing more curse

Putting more people in the hearse, being terse

With our tax dollars, but we holler, over blood

Spilled in the mud, the Dome, and Iraq

With attacks built on the backs

Of lies, cries, and spies sent by our own folks

The people who we put in charge by our own vote

What the hell? We all hate the evil that's in charge

But no one's doing jack to the stack of fat cat's liven so large

Acten like we're Gomer and they all are the Sarge

Please, stand up, talk back, and buck the trend

Don't pretend this the end. You! Go start Black CNN!

Edited September 10, 2005 by Schnazz

[J-o-e]

Dope man!

[Da Brakes]

:word: :thumbsup:

[mfuqua23]

That's down right dope. Straight foward simple. Good job man.