kbfprince Posted September 30, 2005 Report Share Posted September 30, 2005 Hey. This is something I wrote yesterday afternoon when I was supposed to be doing history homework. It was hard to come up with a title, it might be changed. :pony: Thoughts appreciated. Quintessence - kbf What are dreams, seem to brighten, enlighten Me with knowledge I detest how we fighting Giving my all flowin’ every night and Cretins follow and get their names on writing The new revolution past pe’s golden age Touche, shines a new ray of poets working for the rap wage Of cash paid, accounts things of the past days Ain’t working to save, throw it away on strapless stage When some living the cash-less ways on the bay Of opportunities but their spot taken as I portray The image of one desperate, can’t make perfect Audio recording not a merchant never once been elect I’ve been out of breath, outshone by others About to give up but the mic beckons like a frat brother Grounds tremble though the weather, I try not Lest never stop, keep growing though other seeds rot While common folk fought for material items Your ignorant, taught to receive but never provide ‘em Mindless thinking I condemn my nature is concise Try to cut me, never reach past the hem, the opposite of street vice I got advice, just ask and you’ll receive benevolence A new inevitable consequence, I’ve broken my silence I’ve been content with bronze, produce them like the Anyang Something richer around, I defy authority they’d hang Surrounded like I’m in Greek times, masking my expression Different roles at different times, my semblance needs correction Myself in a tragedy with a great character flaw Be the messenger bearing the news for an higher person of law The way it has been, will be, never will change undoubtedly Some step to the limelight but I shy away towards the crowded seas And blend in like I’m a fish underneath a shark’s fin I can’t help but camouflage underneath someone else’s skin Look through that toothy grin a gaping hole Gender roles still apply my situation out of my control Blanking out as it’s my time to ascend from the bottom From tomatoes rotten to a field of crop blossoming First dates to the first golden ring, love at first wake Lingering, break the commandments, adulterate first mistake Who can blame me for wanting none of that duplicity Quintessence, pure innocence defeats weaponry But if doubt creeps in seeking my chivalry I may crumple like papier after hearing they wanna rival me Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
PeaceAngel Posted October 1, 2005 Report Share Posted October 1, 2005 That was really good! You got some clever rhymes in there, and it has a great flow! Great job on this! :thumbsup: Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
J-o-e Posted October 1, 2005 Report Share Posted October 1, 2005 Good song, wish i can get my head down and write, Can't think of anything these days Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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