Fresh-Ta-Def Posted October 9, 2005 Report Share Posted October 9, 2005 theres a few things in this world that i just dont understand like why you walk in a white store an they fallow a black man like he stole somethin in his hand or down his pants why it take so long foh a ambulance in new orleans, baggy hat durag and a pair of jeans why are there so many homeless, an so many feen's stuck on these streets, an these river revenes... why do so many young die befor they get their teens parents pass down genes, an you say you aint good enough sayin dont talk about you aint about it, dawg you aint hood enough well lemme tell you i've had enough, it effects us all, some aint that tough lifes just to rough, but dont give up, cause baby you gotta keep ya head up stay strong never let-up, baby even if you fed-up, juss get-up lemme tell you i thought i been through it all, untill i seen-this parents an teens-pissed, while the rest livin a dream Yes! kanye on tv whilin out i respect dude we gotta stand up, we just gotta get-through respect-few, but feel the pain of so many, i'm white but i feel it we one in all common aint-we? we gotta stand up... an do whats right people dieing overnight, an it just aint right.. I'm fightin a fight, that i've fought all my life.. aint ready to give up, i gotta make it right! last few days I been askin many questions like where I'mma end up, with lifes lessons my agression, has led me to these confessions fixing my broken heart, hold it togather let it mend create a new start, and hold it down till the end my heads shaken up thoughts are blured when my raps mean something and my lyrics are words thats when i know I've been heard, and they respect what I say because with out all these problems i would have nothing to say (So I Say) "we broke, we living, we dead, we sinners, we smoke, we givin, we lead, we driven" ---------------------------------------------------------------------------------- "i'm givin up my hands layed down on my shoulder fly wit'me drive wit'me glide wit'me, come on over" we gotta stand up... an do whats right people dieing overnight, an it just aint right.. I'm fightin a fight, that i've fought all my life.. aint ready to give up, i gotta make it right! Is this supposed to happen? from a closed perspective from a nose dective, to a rose collective, plate in a state of driven hate, that debates, all that i say everynight, everyday, with out nothing to say when i pray asking the pastor how to be saved,--An i did--- but i know my hole caved --An i sinned---Yes i did--- so when you ask yourself what this song means i'm basically saying that life aint peaches an cream when i dream, I'm a feen older then a teen my record washed like tide keep you clean when I open my eyes i see the roses that feild gone through school knowin i yeild, when my shield breaks and my heart hurts before i slip and i fall because without my faith i would have nothing at all we gotta stand up... an do whats right people dieing overnight, an it just aint right.. I'm fightin a fight, that i've fought all my life.. aint ready to give up, i gotta make it right! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kbfprince Posted October 9, 2005 Report Share Posted October 9, 2005 beautiful. that was dope ftd, the emotion and feeling was evident. the third verse was the strongest in my opinion. the hook was nice as well. :2thumbs: Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fresh-Ta-Def Posted October 9, 2005 Author Report Share Posted October 9, 2005 thanks Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
PeaceAngel Posted October 9, 2005 Report Share Posted October 9, 2005 Wow, that was really good! I can definitely sense the emotion in there. Great job on this! :2thumbs: Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fresh-Ta-Def Posted October 10, 2005 Author Report Share Posted October 10, 2005 yeah thanks Funky Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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