More Then Music

[Fresh-Ta-Def]

Verse1:

I know so many people, that have so many problems.

they work togather as a family so that they can solve-em.

i got cousin's an aunt's i never knew till i called-em

an now i'm sittin back like a witch wit my couldrin

but on the real its my note book what i rap-in

rap sucks now but who knew it would happen

I'm stuck here in the car, mom tell me to strap-in

cause she wants to keep me safe, so i sneeze in a napkin.

i tell you i got mad love for my mom's an pop's

cause they the one who said "he aint did it" to the cops

they the ones sayin keep goin an don't stop

don't let ya hip-hop, turn into stupid pop, or that rock

or other music, that you aint supposed to

an don't turn people down just if they appose you

stay with the ones that your close to

cause if they chose you, then you got someone to go to.

lies are a part of life you do it when you sleep

wake up an you creep, an ya wife knows you cheat.

but without that certain leap, you can't respect it.

if you don't make a move, then don't expect it.

Chorus: (x2)

this is more then muuu-ss-ick, i tend to uuu-sse-it

as a form of life, but i can't abuuu-ss-it

"i been workin my ass off just tryna play it safe,

so I know its a hit when i step up to the plate"

Verse2:

I make moves, that take you's, to a whole new level

I'm a diverse artist, so just don't call me the devil

I'm god, I'm an angel, I'm heaven I'm earth

I aint play the part, but to the game its what I'm worth.

now don't get it twisted I aint sayin I'm god

I'm sayin I'm a legand like Will, jay-z, an pac.

if you take what i give, then I'mma take what you got

cause I'm one of the only rappers aint sayin I'm hot

your not, an i expose-it, till it gets to my toe-its

so cold-its, fro-zen, to bits on the floor

if i say it once i aint gon say it no more

but if i take it from the core, they aint gon play it no more?

what, i ask you what happen to hip-hop?

cause i swear right now it seems like its-lost.

it-costs so much just to give up ya dream.

an i tell you right now it aint easy being me.

but the way things seem, i should just give up.

i move up, but when will i be good enough ( you heards me)

Chorus: (x2)

this is more then muuu-ss-ick, i tend to uuu-sse-it

as a form of life, but i can't abuuu-ss-it

"i been workin my ass off just tryna play it safe,

so I know its a hit when i step up to the plate"

[PeaceAngel]

but without that certain leap, you can't respect it.

if you don't make a move, then don't expect it.

^^ I really like this line. Those were some dope rhymes! Good job on this! :2thumbs:

[Turntable]

I like that..

"I aint play the part, but to the game its what I'm worth.

now don't get it twisted I aint sayin I'm god

I'm sayin I'm a legand like Will, jay-z, an pac.

if you take what i give, then I'mma take what you got

cause I'm one of the only rappers aint sayin I'm hot

Good Job!

[Fresh-Ta-Def]

thanks Ya'll i been workin alot on my rhymes right now so its good to get feed

[mfuqua23]

Yo that was a real cool rhyme. Tho, I'm wondering how the chorus would sound. I tried to sing it. This type of song would probably help people understand how they feel about music when they weren't sure. Nice topic.