Members Snouf Posted October 22, 2005 Members Report Share Posted October 22, 2005 THE POWER OF A SMILE A long time I thought that sky is the limit But now I know it better, love is the limit 'Cause if you are loved by the person you love to death You don't even know limits, you don't want to rest You feel untouchable just the way she smiles The way she smiles at you when you kiss her It's pure magic when your lips hit her's And you are happy just because she's with you Nothing else matters, just that she's with you The world is perfect with her head on your shoulder Something to die for, so you became a soldier A soldier with heart, a soldier who cries A soldier with that much passion, that love never dies At that moment you know the power of a smile And you miss it if you don't see it for a while... Hope you like it! I know some lines are not that good but I wanted to say these things in that moment so I don't think about a better solution. Let me know what you think. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
mfuqua23 Posted October 22, 2005 Report Share Posted October 22, 2005 "Something to die for, so you became a soldier" - I instantly thought of 2pac when I saw that line. That poem is great. That's the cool things about poems; they can take on any rhythm you give them. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
J-o-e Posted October 22, 2005 Report Share Posted October 22, 2005 Great poem Snouf!, Keep it up! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Members Snouf Posted October 22, 2005 Author Members Report Share Posted October 22, 2005 "Something to die for, so you became a soldier" - I instantly thought of 2pac when I saw that line. That poem is great. That's the cool things about poems; they can take on any rhythm you give them. Yes, Tupac is a big inspiration for me, I really like those lines: The world is perfect with her head on your shoulder Something to die for, so you became a soldier A soldier with heart, a soldier who cries A soldier with that much passion, that love never dies Some true stuff and it sounds great I think :1-say-yes: Anyway, thanks for the feedback Joe and mfuqua! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kbfprince Posted October 22, 2005 Report Share Posted October 22, 2005 beautiful poem Snouf :wickedwisdom: Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Members Snouf Posted October 22, 2005 Author Members Report Share Posted October 22, 2005 Thank you! :yeah: Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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