Fresh-Ta-Def Posted October 30, 2005 Report Share Posted October 30, 2005 I messed up the chours I Reverbed it too much buh oh well it only took me a couple of min to do this trial run. Lemme know if Download goes down! Audio http://rapidshare.de/files/6942872/Pain-_B...ctions.mp3.html Lyrics verse1: (Blaze) I said i would always hold chu down but theres just so much pain in my life right now picture me crying there on the ground I've been around, a minute or too girls be asking if I'm finished wit chu. what chu want me to do, when I'm out late at night i aint always wanna come home an start up a fight girl you know me like, the back of ya hand I will always be there for you, cause I'm ya man I hope you understand, pain is just a vertue I know sometimes that I hurt chu but it works too, in the same perspective An sometimes i cherrish you like a collective I sit back an respective...ly listen to you I'm supposed to stop yellin every time you bitchen boo you went you were gone, an I was missin you boo Then weeks passed by i sall you kissin a dude infront of his house like you just shut me out so i played back, an just shut my mouth I figured you catch me then I'm out on to the next chick, big lips, nice hips an sometimes I aint always respectin ya shyt cause I loved you an you played me like I didn't exist Chorus: (Blaze) Pain,.,..... there soo much in this game sometimes, I'm tired of it,( it makes me wanna quit) but I gotta hold my own.... cause I tired an I sick, so baby leave me alone(got it) Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kbfprince Posted October 30, 2005 Report Share Posted October 30, 2005 The chorus was awkward to me. I think you overdid it. Your tone was right for the song, some little problems w/ flow but overall its a good track. :wickedwisdom: Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fresh-Ta-Def Posted October 30, 2005 Author Report Share Posted October 30, 2005 yeh i did most of it off top, its for a mixtape so I do it Jay-z Style. if it wuz album material I would work work work like 1-2 weeks to get it right. Thanks for the Feed Back Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fresh-Ta-Def Posted October 30, 2005 Author Report Share Posted October 30, 2005 (edited) yeh i did most of it off top, its for a mixtape so I do it Jay-z Style. if it wuz album material I would work work work like 1-2 weeks to get it right. Thanks for the Feed Back Edited October 30, 2005 by Fresh-Ta-Def Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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