Silver Tiger Posted November 2, 2005 Report Share Posted November 2, 2005 Ok yall. This is a song that I wrote, I'm proud of, and it pretty much got ignored. It's an A Cappella, but it holds its own as such. I'm just posting this real quick. I'll post the lyrics too, but I think it all syncs together when you know how it flows (meaning, I'd like you to listen to it). It's a fictional story called "Buster". The song: http://www.soundclick.com/bands/pagemusic.cfm?bandID=186572 The lyrics: -Now with all that you can muster, Do you remember last December, you was kissing Buster? -I shrugged it, said I trust her 5 days later, then I bust her -She was so shocked she played sleep walk And charged out like she’s Custer -Now Buster’s getting flustered My fists are getting swollen -I’m already punching holes in His baby starts to screaming -Dude calls the cops, but I ain’t fleeing The cops show up and split us up -B. fakes it tough My girl shows up, she says that Buster’s had enough -She played it rough, but I’m unfair Must be, I messed up his hair -I step up close My head is roasting -Bout to do some creeper toasting Buster shouts and now he’s boasting -Better have that Holy Ghost in I break the ropes, he starts to choke -He spins around and hits the ground One second later cops surround -Hands are up I’ve had enough Girl can keep this whiny chump -The cuffs are on and Buster’s gone Girl runs and says she knows she’s wrong -I stare her down She cowers out -Walks on home, she starts to pout But she don’t know, I locked her out Anyway, I'm comin' full swingin' right now and I've got some ideas in my head. Wheels are turning and this ain't the last you've seen of me. God Blessa! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
J-o-e Posted November 2, 2005 Report Share Posted November 2, 2005 Nice keep it up! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Silver Tiger Posted November 3, 2005 Author Report Share Posted November 3, 2005 Thanks for just replying. I really mean, it's good just to be acknowledged. And bigger thanks for liking it. :1-say-yes: God Blessa! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Da Brakes Posted November 3, 2005 Report Share Posted November 3, 2005 You got real good wordplay on this! With the right beat behind this, this could be a really good track! let us know when you get a beat for it! :2thumbs: Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kbfprince Posted November 3, 2005 Report Share Posted November 3, 2005 nice.. youre flow was good on this. good luck on finding a beat! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Silver Tiger Posted November 3, 2005 Author Report Share Posted November 3, 2005 Thanks for the replies. Yeah, I'd like a beat too, I just didn't wanna change the way the song flows. If I ever find/make the right beat I'll be sure to re-record it. I'm working on another song right now that I think'll turn out pretty cool. Thanks for the positive feedback. God Blessa! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fresh-Ta-Def Posted November 3, 2005 Report Share Posted November 3, 2005 nice wordplay g Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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