Members Snouf Posted November 12, 2005 Members Report Share Posted November 12, 2005 TOUCHIN' SOULS I touch your soul 'cause of the things I write in my songs You don't find jewels there or bitches in tight thongs I touch you 'cause I show you my truest fears It's hard and sometimes my face is full of tears I make you cry too 'cause I write about pain You feel my emotions that ain't a game Watch me writing this verse not for fame Shut up, you don't even know my name I just want to get these lines out 'Cause it helps me to get the pain out Picture me crying in the dark, late night With the pen in my hand, holdin' it tight That's the sad truth I feel pain in my heart - fear in my head I don't want to loose Come on, let me touch you with every line I write Building dreams and fantasies everytime I write You know what I mean, there ain't nothing like And even if you don't know me I can make you cry You don't know my methods, stop asking why I write things that hit you right in your heart About love, the pain, real stories from the start Show me some love if you feel these lines I put my heart in my lyrics, lovin' these rhymes And if your soul wants to be touched Just read my lyrics and it will get touched! What do you all think? Remember I'm from Germany so there might be some mistakes in it... :yeah: (I love this smily) :yeah: Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kbfprince Posted November 12, 2005 Report Share Posted November 12, 2005 That's beautiful Snouf :2thumbs: 'Watch me writing this verse not for fame Shut up, you don't even know my name' shows your pain & fustration.. nice piece once again. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Members Snouf Posted November 12, 2005 Author Members Report Share Posted November 12, 2005 Thanks KBF! I got a lot of more lyrics but they all in german that's why I don't post so much stuff... Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
J-o-e Posted November 12, 2005 Report Share Posted November 12, 2005 Good lyrics...keep it up man Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Members Snouf Posted November 12, 2005 Author Members Report Share Posted November 12, 2005 Thx Joe, I will! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
PeaceAngel Posted November 14, 2005 Report Share Posted November 14, 2005 :word: Nice lyrics man, keep doing your thing! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Turntable Posted November 16, 2005 Report Share Posted November 16, 2005 Cool.My mother language is German too.Maybe finnaly someone i can batlte in germna.. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Members Snouf Posted November 16, 2005 Author Members Report Share Posted November 16, 2005 Ich schreib eigentlich keine Battle Texte, aber wenn du willst können wir einfach aus Spaß mal was kicken :) Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Admin Hero1 Posted November 18, 2005 Admin Report Share Posted November 18, 2005 dope man.. :2thumbs: Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Members Snouf Posted November 18, 2005 Author Members Report Share Posted November 18, 2005 Thank you very much! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Chief Posted November 18, 2005 Report Share Posted November 18, 2005 not bad sir.... Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
mfuqua23 Posted November 18, 2005 Report Share Posted November 18, 2005 "I touch you 'cause I show you my truest fears It's hard and sometimes my face is full of tears" - These lines reminded me of Pac. PRetty cool song. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Members Snouf Posted November 19, 2005 Author Members Report Share Posted November 19, 2005 "I touch you 'cause I show you my truest fears It's hard and sometimes my face is full of tears" - These lines reminded me of Pac. PRetty cool song. Ya, these lines could be from Pac but my inspiration was Immortal Technieque's "You Never Know". Thanks for the feedback guys, appreciate it! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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