Da Brakes Posted December 17, 2005 Report Share Posted December 17, 2005 * 16 lines each * 2 days to post your verse (read rules if unclear about this) * Fresh-Ta-Def to spit first :bat: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fresh-Ta-Def Posted December 18, 2005 Report Share Posted December 18, 2005 Yoh...I aint no gangsta, An i don't sell Pounds/ Da Brakes must hate you, put you against me in the 1st round?/ either thats a mistake, or he don't care who your with/ After this battle you ask him.. "Tell Me Why?" like ~Smith~/* if you spit back, I'll leave it an call you Deliorus/ cause your rhymes are on the low, like your Experience/** You need to step it up, get busy for a few days/ like Disposable Camera's, ya rhymes are Throw-Away's/*** if rhymes can kill, then I'd be charged for mudering ya over a beat/ or leave you with nothing straight homeless on the street/ cause i wright more in a day then you can wright in a week/ I don't do this to ~Get Rich~, Schnazz you can get shot like Young Ceaser/**** Wanna be like everyone else, But you aint Iced out like a Freezer/ Or like the winter right now in Canada-whore/ but I won't hurt you to bad cause I'ma man-Of-Da-Lord/ Sweet 16, I'm done... Common an Handel-Its-Yours..../ EXPLINATION'S OF ANYTHING WITH *'s *- Will Smiths song "Tell Me Why" **- Your experience on the side is low ***-Disposable Camera's are throw aways ****-Young Ceaser was 50Cents character in "Get Rich..." he got Shot several times Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Schnazz Posted December 18, 2005 Report Share Posted December 18, 2005 Is that sorry rhyme your attempt to bring some funk? Fresh-Ta-Def, you're nothen but a punk kicken some junk We all have a role on this board, it's time you learned yours Hero is the leader, followed by scores of Switch whores MaxFly's educated and the talented one is Brakes Ya know I'm brilliant, and you're the fake maken mistakes You're a five month member with a thousand posts You say so little but can still boast to type the most Your rhymes are obvious to kindergarten rejects Save the cliff notes for something that's complex and can vex Dude, you're a hypocrite, stop emulating Kanye West You got nothen, and Kanye isn't the crest of the best While I'm at it, your sig sounds like a quote from a firing squad You quote trash and still try to give a nod to your God? Your flat disgusting, you think it's cool to smack a female? That jive stuff sounds like you're trying to hail the ignant trail Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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