Trey Posted December 24, 2005 Report Share Posted December 24, 2005 I've been wanting to write a Christmas kind of rap for a while,and it has taken me a while to write it..... Jingle Jingle Boom! In the Christmas time\\ A guy named Rackler just wanted to make a good rhyme\\ He had no time,it was coming before he could stop it\\ Your sometimes in so much pain that ya just want to end it\\ Making rhymes is harder then it looks\\ He would try to get a couple of rap books\\ Those don't really work,if ya want your own style\\ Looking and looking for his favorite rap in the cabnit file\\ When ya sit down to right a good rap...you think\\ You start it off with a blink\\ You type until your hand gets sore\\ Inside your heart tells ya more more more!\\ (Chorus,Twice) Jingle,Christmas time is a busy time Jingle,Presents cards family and more Boom!,It sometimes gives ya a want to write more! The day after Christmas little kids playing with there toys\\ Boys are playing with there new Game Boys\\ Girls playing house with there dolls\\ The older brother singing "Deck The Halls"\\ The moms trying on new clothes\\ I think that's worse then the bro's\\ Dad's get a new rench set\\ Others placing down a bet\\ One of the presents I give my family is a peice of my rap\\ My grandma sometimes crys she's proud of me...now that's a rap\\ (Chorus)X2 Tell me if ya like it. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Damian Posted December 24, 2005 Report Share Posted December 24, 2005 It could be, but not too enought. Rather Im thinking about christmas rap carol, with praysing the Lord etc.:) Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bigted Posted December 26, 2005 Report Share Posted December 26, 2005 :wiggle: That's pretty cool! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Members Ali Posted December 26, 2005 Members Report Share Posted December 26, 2005 Keep it up. :2thumbs: Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Trey Posted January 7, 2006 Author Report Share Posted January 7, 2006 This isn't my best song,I've made better ones. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Luigie Posted January 7, 2006 Report Share Posted January 7, 2006 It's well done..the title is brilliant i like it Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Trey Posted January 9, 2006 Author Report Share Posted January 9, 2006 Thanks everybody. :2thumbs: Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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