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(Chrous)

Are you ready for da hood or you think you to good (What!)

I said are you ready for da hood or you think your to good

(verse)

Since you think your to good for da hood

then what I should is wat I could or maybe i would

no one cares for you so cut off the hard act

matta fact I am a real rhymer unlike you wit your crappy one linners

see me and Baby D we real rappers but your raps get whacker

so i'll flush them down the crapper watch your back

if you dont want to bleed cause i pity the greed

when you hear a gat you know that

it aint me cause I go "click Clack"

na let me stop that you lil annoyin rat

you stupid ass brat listen to the hood gat

(Chorus)

(Outro Talkin)

See if you diss me then you think yoou to good for the hood then you definalty not ready ya know what i mean

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I love listening to uplifting music :hmm:

I think you need to ditch this 'hard' act, and get some positive messages going. I don't know where you're going with this, (but I have a pretty good idea - emulating the likes of 50 Cent), but you really need to broaden vocab, structure it better, use wordplay. Whatever, just act like who you are for a change. :azzangel:

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uh the song wasnt that bad, it could of ben structured a bit better, could of used some better wordplay like Prince said and uh i dont think you should tell him how to rap, i mean if he wants to rap in ths stupid,ignorant,bullsh!t hard rap, then let him

Geez

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