Admin Hero1 Posted January 11, 2006 Admin Report Share Posted January 11, 2006 good deeds, can be the death of you it feeds, into a better you if you on the posa, there'll always be a negative good heart burnt down, but let it live obstacles you face, can get repetitive road blocks a taste, of your sedative but I will fight on, keep my light on right wrongs, til the nights gone be water, let the pressure move through you flow calmly, and dont let it get to you in the future, you'll look back on this moment thank yourself, for defeating this opponent good health, is a true battle of the mind true health, is happiness you will find view wealth, as a struggle to break you friendship, will only last if you stay true so dont give up, no matter how much they hate you im in the cut, and im gonna do what blade do my retisence, lingers but i make do cause the evidence, is the victory I take to im gonna ponder, wonder if its worth it pain makes you stronger, only if you use it days lead to hunger, of the soul surface unearth the struggle, good deeds you will work with you aint alone, we all in our battles but you cant stay underground, as if you were the fraggles when you help yourself, you ultimately help others father brother, sister and mother dont give into the weakness, keep doing whats right the flak you cop now the bleakness, burnt up in the light good deeds keep you human so thats what ima keep doin Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MissAshley Posted January 11, 2006 Report Share Posted January 11, 2006 that was tight Tim!..just what I needed to hear right now, having minor issues, so thanks for that dude Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Admin Hero1 Posted January 11, 2006 Author Admin Report Share Posted January 11, 2006 glad you felt it Ash..havin a few setbacks of my own Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
mfuqua23 Posted January 11, 2006 Report Share Posted January 11, 2006 Very dope overall. "but you cant stay underground, as if you were the fraggles" - that was a cool line. "view wealth, as a struggle to break you friendship, will only last if you stay true" Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Da Brakes Posted January 11, 2006 Report Share Posted January 11, 2006 Damn thats real good Tim! I love your wordplay/rhyme scheme that you write with! :2thumbs: Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ash trey Posted January 15, 2006 Report Share Posted January 15, 2006 That is some great rhyming and it is amazing to see that you did this without moving off context. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Admin Hero1 Posted January 15, 2006 Author Admin Report Share Posted January 15, 2006 thanks man that was a freestyle actually Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ash trey Posted January 20, 2006 Report Share Posted January 20, 2006 Wow! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Chief Posted January 20, 2006 Report Share Posted January 20, 2006 that sucked tim.....i so did not feel it....:) Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
3cookies Posted January 21, 2006 Report Share Posted January 21, 2006 (edited) CHIEF !!! Somebody should pluck those feathers off your head turkey! ONE by ONE!! lmao... peace, cookie Edited January 21, 2006 by 3cookies Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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