Silver Tiger Posted January 26, 2006 Report Share Posted January 26, 2006 I finally had time to record my song. There's a story on the page. The song is something different for me, but I like it. And finally, the vocals are clear, no feedback. http://www.soundclick.com/bands/pagemusic.cfm?bandID=186572 There's no hook, it's just me rapping the whole way through. I don't really expect anyone other than me and the girl who fueled this song to know exactly what I'm talking about, but it helps to know that she just turned her back on me without reason. Music became my lady. Here's the lyrics: -I remember when my phone would shake 45 times in a day That’s 15 smiles to my face -Looking to the future, it would only get brighter Nowadays I’m the dude tryin’a bum ya candle-lighter -I was runnin’ till the earth shook You want my raw story? Here’s the first look -On top of the world, every day brought the love All because of this girl, now it’s gone, that’s rough, life’s tough -Had enough, brought an audience out their seats Friends gone wrong running like a track meet -Emotion as you smack me, took Hip Hop to bring back me The late-night owl, prey on the lookout for the prowl -A hunter, to those he loved, he was a gunner A runner, was crushed the feelings of the summer -A trip he had, but now he’s mad Confused and sad, to lost, a dad -Everything’s gone wrong, everything’s been changing Alone cause of some people’s rearranging -Explosions brought erosions to the life he knew Sinned before, time to pay his due -Secluded, social silence had intruded Tried to shrug it off, but the problem’s deep rooted -A little time off became a permanent thing Clenched his fist around invisible rings -A survivor, he couldn’t deny her His mind would try to fight her -The four walls held him back He couldn’t understand, his mind would rack -Self-attack, crazy thoughts sprung forth Nothing left to do but question his own worth -A drifter, desire turned to anger Through it all, became a stranger -His own best friend, in the end, was he Ready, he’d be at work on the steady -A Yeti, a legend of his own Had some demons to dethrone -Not dead yet, not exposing the red yet The Drive, just needed places to direct it -Found inside, rhythmic thoughts Music brought him back by the grace of God -Something to love, something to give him love back A painkiller for all the feelings that stacked -Perception of deception was a monster inside All for one, could uncover the secrets that they hide -The reasons that they lied, the choosing of the sides He tried, had to blow this up wide -He opened up his mind to the people he knew, the things we do Why we do them, it just threw him -Greed, deception, all a recollection, still didn’t answer his question Giving up never was suggested, mind feeling tested -Hate arrested, thoughts were vested Put a smile on but his feelings were gone -Journey’s been long, but he knows it’s a beginning Second winning, another chapter for the spinning -Pages torn, writes a song Writes till dawn, he records in the morn -Process, so enveloped he could never stop this Makes the most, of free days to boast -A Hip Hop host, forsaken by most The star of the toast, the star of the roast -He asks what’s left, commits the theft He steals the hearts, it’s just the start -Destroys the charts, creates the bonds He makes the songs, he makes the songs Please tell me what you think, I appreciate all the feedback I can get! God Blessa! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lerkot Posted January 26, 2006 Report Share Posted January 26, 2006 Its all good, but I would really like you to rap a track in a really happy and expressionfilled way, you know like FP did in his old school tracks like Girls Aint Nothin But Trouble, I think you would sound a lot like FP then :) Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Silver Tiger Posted January 26, 2006 Author Report Share Posted January 26, 2006 Its all good, but I would really like you to rap a track in a really happy and expressionfilled way, you know like FP did in his old school tracks like Girls Aint Nothin But Trouble, I think you would sound a lot like FP then :) Thanks, I said after my last song that the next one would be a funny one, I lied. I'm saying it again though, the next song will be something to smile to. God Blessa! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Da Brakes Posted January 27, 2006 Report Share Posted January 27, 2006 I agree this is very different but I like it nonetheless! You have a nice prescence on the mic! Keep it up dude! :thumbsup: Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest VAsFinestRenagade Posted January 27, 2006 Report Share Posted January 27, 2006 nice you havea good voice Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bigwill Posted January 28, 2006 Report Share Posted January 28, 2006 Nice man! Not bas at all! :2thumbs: Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Silver Tiger Posted January 31, 2006 Author Report Share Posted January 31, 2006 Thanks for the positive feedback. I appreciate it. I'm working on my next song again. And once again, I'm saying it will be "What if Snails Could Blink?" I've already got the first verse on lock and this will be my first song with a hook. I'm looking forward to it. God Blessa! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Members MpenA Posted January 31, 2006 Members Report Share Posted January 31, 2006 wow i liked it alot you chose a very good beat for your voice so it sounded good i liked it alot Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
3cookies Posted January 31, 2006 Report Share Posted January 31, 2006 very nice djsilvertiger ! :2thumbs: peace, cookie Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Da Brakes Posted January 31, 2006 Report Share Posted January 31, 2006 Come on guys! I know there's more people than this that check out this forum! :stickpoke: Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
3cookies Posted January 31, 2006 Report Share Posted January 31, 2006 (edited) LOL...i know, right? I hafta admit, we got a huge variety of talent on the forum, and I've seen quite afew of our fam grow lyrically and production wise too... I'm really proud of u guys.. for hangin in there... but look... long as u dont 4get us lil pplZ when u get BIG... lol. :yeah: peace, cookie Edited January 31, 2006 by 3cookies Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Big Willie Posted January 31, 2006 Report Share Posted January 31, 2006 That was great Silver Tiger....good job :2thumbs: Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Silver Tiger Posted February 2, 2006 Author Report Share Posted February 2, 2006 (edited) Thanks a lot everyone. I also really appreciate the call to action by Brakes and cookies lol. God Blessa! Edited February 2, 2006 by djsilvertiger Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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