J-o-e Posted February 9, 2006 Report Share Posted February 9, 2006 ayyo, I think I need a bit of help with this chorus, I had a dope one, wrote it down and was gone....but anyway, these are my new lyrics. "What's Hip Hop?" - Written By J-o-e What’s Hip Hop This What’s Hip Hop That U Hip Hop? U Feeling This What’s A Hip Hop Track? Maybe it’s our fault, being stranded on welfare Now let me ask Mr. Bush if he really does care In the music industry, it’s different from streets Here u eating lavishly, streets u can’t eat It’s a terrible thing to see, no silver spoon Giving the poor no money, Ur a Looney Toon Walk down my street, u can see drug bags Fiends take they last drags, loading up mags Running from the police, gun to the brain Going insane that rappers can expect fame So tell me ya’ll really know what hip hop is Because behind the microphone I’m a whiz Spit some real slick ****, if I can go on bail Or please no Mr. Officer, don’t send me to jail I’ve had enough, this is because of hip hop Asked the lord when does the brutality stop But that’s how he rolled, getting locked up He a snitch, so that’s why he got socked up There’s no other reason for killing another Just think of Ur mothers tears for killing a brother… What’s Hip Hop This What’s Hip Hop That U Hip Hop? U Feeling This What’s A Hip Hop Track? Most people don’t know about the killing Pretty much the wrong turn for drug dealing This time it’s a little kid, getting shot up Can’t anyone see, that he was caught up Held his nine, clutched it, it’s his life or mine 14 years old, in the life a ghetto kid of crime So this is hip hop, so why can’t u stop To stop all this bull****, I’ll have an album flop Some say that hip hop was about old school Some say that it’s about killing some fools I’m not like any of them, about the street I just like to go home, rest my tired feet Debating for decades, the true meaning It’s just like, picking up dry cleaning It’s life all around us, finally found us But the police just want to hound us For centuries human’s have adapted Just look for a second at the rap I crafted It’s not easy being an dope MC can U see That I rap because it’s a way to feel free… What’s Hip Hop This What’s Hip Hop That U Hip Hop? U Feeling This What’s A Hip Hop Track? ------------ So what ya'll think, any part that needs improving please tell me :bowdown: Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
PeaceAngel Posted February 9, 2006 Report Share Posted February 9, 2006 Wow, you're speaking the truth there! Nice song man! :2thumbs: Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Luigie Posted February 9, 2006 Report Share Posted February 9, 2006 it's all good!!! :2thumbs: the chorus only needs more work :1-smile: Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mike Posted February 9, 2006 Report Share Posted February 9, 2006 i actually liked the chorus it was good. :2thumbs: good song Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
the_bigmac Posted February 10, 2006 Report Share Posted February 10, 2006 :thumbdown: :thumbdown: Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
J-o-e Posted February 10, 2006 Author Report Share Posted February 10, 2006 Thanks 4 Ur views, what do u thinks wrong with it bigmac?? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
3cookies Posted February 10, 2006 Report Share Posted February 10, 2006 bigmac u shouldnt give ppl tht many thumbdowns 2 a fellow fan thats at least TRYING,... without even tellin them why u gave a poor critique... that was rude man... JOE,... I dont think it was all that bad, its basically gonna be all about your flow and the music u put 2getha...it can work as it is, im sure, but once u get the rhythm 2getha, (if u haven't already) thats gonna be where ppl can feel it...if that made any sense... peace, cookie Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Luigie Posted February 10, 2006 Report Share Posted February 10, 2006 Are u serious man!!!?? :stickpoke: or just another Chief? :wiggle: Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
PeaceAngel Posted February 10, 2006 Report Share Posted February 10, 2006 Are u serious man!!!?? :stickpoke: or just another Chief? :wiggle: If you're serious, maybe a comment would be helpful... Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Turntable Posted February 11, 2006 Report Share Posted February 11, 2006 I liked it. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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