Guest VAsFinestRenagade Posted February 21, 2006 Report Share Posted February 21, 2006 (edited) lets get this party started this beat is way retarded lets get this party started my flow is way retarded now kets act like a mime and do the running man like hammertime you dont have to drop a dime so were dancin to the rhyme si this is an anti-crime access time dancin rhyme dancin so hard that there is sweet on my chest you jest to increase my zest so now were dancin to our best we doin the salsa but we walkin through the balsa we doin a mexican dance firls take your chance we aint tryin to get in you pants so we glance at france and our dancin is advancin standin in our rap stance so now this is in you mind like a trance (chorus) lets do the cha cha ha ha blah blah your dancin is nifty you dress very spify when you hear the bass go THUMP we pump the volume UP i am makin this tune jus so you can hear the bass go boom STOP its dancin time STOP its a party rhyme this song is for the house, the club, your spouse, the pub so we switchen and twithen and itchen for the pitchen we on the dance floor the song is over but you want to hear more you on the ground and you see me around (chorus) tell me what you all think wat i need to approve on Edited February 21, 2006 by VAsFinestRenagade Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Its JP Posted February 21, 2006 Report Share Posted February 21, 2006 (edited) my flow is way retarded that it is, that it is Edited February 21, 2006 by Its JP Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest VAsFinestRenagade Posted February 21, 2006 Report Share Posted February 21, 2006 that was uncalled for Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest VAsFinestRenagade Posted February 22, 2006 Report Share Posted February 22, 2006 how come no one posts in my songs do u all hate me Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lerkot Posted February 22, 2006 Report Share Posted February 22, 2006 Cus the tracks suck man... Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jonny 5 Posted February 22, 2006 Report Share Posted February 22, 2006 Cus the tracks suck man... Lerk is right, no offence but it would be better to get a new hobby, unless you wanna try and improve Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
J-o-e Posted February 22, 2006 Report Share Posted February 22, 2006 I can't believe I'm going to do this, but VA if u need help i'll be happy to...I wouldn't say it sucked that bad, it sucked yes, but... 1....it's way too short for a "Party" track 2....U can learn to use more words to rhyme with Jus ask if u need any help becoz I am happy to... Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest VAsFinestRenagade Posted February 22, 2006 Report Share Posted February 22, 2006 i now it aint that goood cause it is my first party track and JOE yea if u could help me wit more rhymes Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
cristigolo Posted February 22, 2006 Report Share Posted February 22, 2006 it sucks here you go i posted Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Its JP Posted February 22, 2006 Report Share Posted February 22, 2006 i now it aint that goood cause it is my first party track and JOE yea if u could help me wit more rhymes why would you post i if you knew it wasn't good Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Luigie Posted February 22, 2006 Report Share Posted February 22, 2006 (edited) Just need more work man! dont worry i can help too! :2thumbs:..Hey buddies if he knew his stuff wasnt good he posted cuz he wants sum productive critize..i have posted verses that r pure trash n nobody said me i sucked...just gave sum advices, thats it...keep it up renagade! Edited February 22, 2006 by Luigie Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest VAsFinestRenagade Posted February 22, 2006 Report Share Posted February 22, 2006 ty and see Renagades stick togetgjer Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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