J-o-e Posted July 18, 2004 Report Share Posted July 18, 2004 Ayyo, ive been away a while trying to get my own style, and my own flava to writing music at its best, even though this might not be a good example, im wrote this song when one of my friends could be pregnant at the age of 16...... -------------------------------- Beautiful Baby - by J-o-e i remember this girl, at the perfect age crack head dads, here begins the rage babies born without souls, wheres the human race same adreninaln pumpin when you standin face to face fist to fist, knee to elbow, and then **** hit the floor teenage pregnecies, fathers way out of the door single mothers on welfare how can this be true babies cryin in the distances of the wind, it was you a tear drops down your cheek just like an avanlanche smoking so much weed, addicted you almost smoked the branch wont do your baby too good if you dont care women are strong, makin us men come into this world naked and bare you got a baby and you got to stick with it your man left you so theres nuttin you can do about it shouting and aggression you begin to turn red wishin one day that you might unlucky be dead keep ya head up baby girl im here for ya'll sittin next to the phone wonderin if hes gonna call so much worrying while we out on the hustle i've experienced a girl, who had to have a tustle she was pregnant, and this was in the uk only 16, her life seem so far away she's keeping the baby and theres no option of abortion he left you standing there all cold, theres no caution no warning that he will do this to you remember that he loves you alot and will always do so just before you go all crazy just look at your child, its a beautiful baby You made us see life dont look at that ****ty knife ****ty life wonderin when its over goin all crazy, about your beautiful baby its a baby boy and he has the dad's eyes people will realise when the dad lies wont even give you a dime, now thats cold was shoutin at everynight, damn you was told it wasnt rape, but you could of accused him christmas candles standin around the fire singing hyms life seems better now, but theres a huge shock not enough money, dont get yourself down your man blew the ****in money on the night of a town at 6 months he was your pride and soul at the age of 1, you sent him out to get you coal need to survive, your momma wont help you she wants the oppurtinies for you it ruins the commuinity and our society if ya'll dont care, then why do you lie to me lie to her, it dont matter cause its over her body left under a range rover her love was strong and she was the only one who didnt know it a single women can change the life of one man but back then, i didnt really understand her boyfriend was an althete, a good one at that i ****ed her up by tellin her some ****, now her man wants me whacked i deserve what i get and i cant say i dont cause i do **** this the stuff i said was that i love you i loved her and now she had a baby which her mother isnt there had some money of welfare, but went to do her hair it dont matter if she couldnt see what she was doing but all she needed was keep her eye on the game and keep puresing her dreams and her hopes but dont get caught up with all the dopes just when shes sky high dont cry even though she was crazy, she has a beautiful baby chorus two years later and now the beautiful baby has turned to a child, but not as crazy ass his mum was, i wasnt mad at her, believe that even if shes gone son, i'll still got ya back you the love of my lifes son, and i cant hack with bad feelings just stay strong, nah i aint your goddaddy, he went away got on a plane, and flew away, he wont be back another day got that plane ticket, knew he was a coward so **** what they say your daddy was full of pride and growth, a great man, he just got scared it happens to lots of children dont worry, i shouldnt be sorry lift your head up, you had a mum that was ****ing nuts didnt want to kill herself, but had the fair share of cuts on her arm, didnt want her to harm, herself so **** it your livin wit me im here for ya, wat can you call me, you can call me j-o-e you got to get a few things clear that you cant think about your mum in a bad way, she was a dear if you do say your mothers name in vain i might flip and slip and go insane dont diss my track, just remember gotta listen to the words **** the words, like my mother****ing verbs im a crazy rapper with money on his money so if im broke dont be suprised if i aint kind if i have money, im so ****ing genourous after this album its gonna be so pennyless so dont go crazy son you was a beautiful baby, ugh chours --------------------- i do apologyze for the swear words, its my style, i dont diss though Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bigted Posted July 18, 2004 Report Share Posted July 18, 2004 I like it, it's very deep, welcome back j-o-e, you're steppin' your game up! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Prince Posted July 18, 2004 Report Share Posted July 18, 2004 [quote=J-o-e,Jul 18 2004, 03:09 PM]im wrote this song when one of my friends could be pregnant at the age of 16......[/quote] I will read this through properly later, but from what you told me over a month ago; are you writing this to try and cover your own guilt? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
J-o-e Posted July 18, 2004 Author Report Share Posted July 18, 2004 nah, i aint writing this for my own guilt i broke up with my ex girlfriend prince...it dont mata this is a close m8 who is having a pregnacy scare, when she already has the worse family, i thought i would write her a song to tell her how i feel about the situation in hand Peace J-o-e Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Da Brakes Posted July 18, 2004 Report Share Posted July 18, 2004 Thats real deep man!! I think those are the best songs though! The one's that come straight from the heart! Well done man! :thumb: Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Prince Posted July 18, 2004 Report Share Posted July 18, 2004 Aight, keep writing man you're coming along, like G said, you steppin' ya game up. This joint would be better without the excessive language... I don't personally take offence from it and in some places swear words fit if you know what I mean, but it seems sometimes they've just been slotted in at random where you couldn't used better words to illustrate what you're trying to say. But yeah, when I compare this to your rhymes from as little a time ago as this time last year it's blindly obvious you're improving as a lyricist although I would say you could've thought out some of the lines better as sometimes the flow of the thing is interrupted. I like how you wrote what was on your mind though, if you write about what you think somebody else could be feeling it always get's a fake sort of feel, but I see that in this you're very emotional; showing that through anger and frustration. Do your thing boy... Makes me want to post up some of my latest rhymes... Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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