WesSyde Posted February 26, 2006 Report Share Posted February 26, 2006 (edited) that was a good rhyme sonic. i have a question relating to the South Dakota banning abortion. i havent read any articles or seen the news, so please forgive me if i'm wrong. but i believe u can still get an abortion in South Dakota because it's a medical procedure and no person in the US can be denied a medical procedure at a hospital. so basically, free abortions can still occur if someone walks into a hospital and doesn't have any money and says i want an abortion. just like if u walked into a hospital with a broken arm and no money, they still have to treat u cuz it's a medical procedure that they can't deny from u. plz tell me if i am mistaken and i will try to find an article (theres probably one in the caught in the middle section if i look) about it. edit: nevermind i actually found out i was wrong after finding an article about it Edited February 26, 2006 by WesSyde Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mike Posted February 26, 2006 Report Share Posted February 26, 2006 i think you would work on the rhyme a little more, make it longer too. nice work. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Turntable Posted February 26, 2006 Report Share Posted February 26, 2006 It was aight. Maybe a lil short lines, but mine are sometimes too long so imma just better say nothing,lol. I also agree with you`r views, I feel the same way. Thats probably the big city life..lol Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Chief Posted February 26, 2006 Report Share Posted February 26, 2006 yea...needs a bit more...cant put my finger on it Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
PeaceAngel Posted February 27, 2006 Report Share Posted February 27, 2006 I think it was really good for your first try. I also agree with your point of view, I don't think abortion should be outlawed. I know some think of it as murder, but in most cases, that's the best thing to do. I also agree with Lerkot on his point of view. I think abortion needs to stay around because I'd assume most teenage girls who end up being pregnant really don't want to give birth to it. I respect everyone's opinions tho. Nice rhymes there, I liked it!! :2thumbs: Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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