Admin Hero1 Posted February 25, 2006 Admin Report Share Posted February 25, 2006 rattle the cage gather the rage unlock the key to your minds soul unhook the sink thats your minds role its a balancing act to keep that balass intact in a scattering track as a matter of fact I move in the groove that damage the track move your weight up and soon your straight up the course the objective the force is protective i forge the collective, minds that source a recollective I said it lets live, no need for trailing, no need for bailing if rudders failing, I wail in and stay thin till the days in I'm catering to improved thinking I'm fading in to the eye blinking yeah thats the mind thinking too many times focus is on the visual not the visceral forget the external for a minute focus on the internal and lets get in it you're life can be broken down into highs and lows how you react to the cheers and blows comes down to what he or she knows that final resource that travels you from point a to z realize distant dreams from the choices you seed paths that are taken without thought inevitable road blocks that lead to value nought train your third eye relax and you'll fly leave the consternation lets teach high concentration too many times we act first and no matter how much you refuse to lose that action you pursue sure to take you places that you never knew and frankly cant handle thats where the brain gets dismantled a true break down for your sake now, see the stakes now? the inability to maximize you're greatest tool is the weakness of every fool so read up get that speech up lead up and feed up nourish the mind with sum deep thought towards you're life and you will reap the rewards sharpen the swords of the mind with true vision elevation starts up what your missin.. cognition :davidblaine: Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
3cookies Posted February 25, 2006 Report Share Posted February 25, 2006 (edited) beautiful, i love it Timboat... training the 'third eye" is a task that many not only, 'dont comprehend', but dont have the skill level to execute that much concentration on self and focus on God, ... instead self absorbtion limiting their potential in life... KUDOS my brotha.. keep writing... :2thumbs: peace, cookie Edited February 25, 2006 by 3cookies Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ash trey Posted February 25, 2006 Report Share Posted February 25, 2006 Whoa very few ppl can actually understand that type of multisyllabic rhyming its a pity these verses might never be heard in audio! Oh BTW ur a genius! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
3cookies Posted February 25, 2006 Report Share Posted February 25, 2006 LOL... i bet when Timboat reads that, you callin him a 'genius' hes gonna rip off his shirt and fleeeX.! lmbo peace, cookie Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Luigie Posted February 25, 2006 Report Share Posted February 25, 2006 Thats hot! :bowdown: Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
andreik Posted February 25, 2006 Report Share Posted February 25, 2006 keep it up :yeah: :yeah: Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Admin Hero1 Posted February 25, 2006 Author Admin Report Share Posted February 25, 2006 I gotta get on the mic dont I :pony: :lolsign: Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Luigie Posted February 25, 2006 Report Share Posted February 25, 2006 (edited) if u got a high quality one its ok...not like me and Jonny :paperbag: Edited February 25, 2006 by Luigie Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
thePrince Posted February 25, 2006 Report Share Posted February 25, 2006 Yeah man, I love this whole thought-provoking style of lyricism. I'm guessing you did it all in one take? Given it's length, quite impressive. I like how you put a prophetic narrative outlook on things. I definitely feel with rhymes such as this, getting it laid down as an audio would take it to a whole new level (unless your mic is like Jonnys). Anyway, yeah. I liked these lines probably best: "realize distant dreams from the choices you seed paths that are taken without thought inevitable road blocks that lead to value nought" "the inability to maximize you're greatest tool is the weakness of every fool so read up get that speech up lead up and feed up nourish the mind with sum deep thought towards you're life and you will reap the rewards sharpen the swords of the mind with true vision elevation starts up what your missin.. cognition" Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Admin Hero1 Posted February 25, 2006 Author Admin Report Share Posted February 25, 2006 thanks prince :2thumbs: whenever i write a freestyle its normally sumthin like this :kekeke: Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jonny 5 Posted February 26, 2006 Report Share Posted February 26, 2006 great stuff Tim, I like your style... Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MissAshley Posted February 27, 2006 Report Share Posted February 27, 2006 you stay droppin' knowledge Tim! lol, seriously i love that, great rhyme scheme....you've inspired me to get back into rhyming, I always love reading your material Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
PeaceAngel Posted February 27, 2006 Report Share Posted February 27, 2006 Wow Tim, I really liked that! Great job man, very inspiring!! :2thumbs: Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Admin Hero1 Posted February 27, 2006 Author Admin Report Share Posted February 27, 2006 thanks yall! interesting people mention the rhyme scheme..since it was a freestyle i didnt plan it..must be the way I write :yeah: Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Da Brakes Posted February 27, 2006 Report Share Posted February 27, 2006 Great job Tim as always! Thats some great skill at freestyling you got there! :2thumbs: Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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