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Trey VS the_bigmac II


Trey

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hey trey

or as you'd like to be called, kayne

as ive said many times before

your verses belong in many herses

your raps have brought curses

your probally a hobo

guy ya got no home boy

rayz of light

more like stay out my sight

bounce back to reaility

so move on up

and ill time you up

you should be banned from rappin

and dont start scrappin

so you spit now

and ill kick your *** in part III

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Bigmac, man, I mean come on, put some effort into it, I mean Damn, Trey if u dont beat him Imma pass out with all the whackness in battling that's gone around here....

Does anyone wanna battle me? I'll show u how it's done...I mean this is disgrace to rap...haha

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When you started off the verse//

Dude, you gotta reahearse//

'Cause that verse stank//

Man, you gotta walk the plank//

Last time I won ten to six//

I still ain't outta tricks//

Why do you swear?//

Your rap is lookin' bear//

Kanye is good//

Better then you could//

Rayz of light was cut//

You need a kick in the butt//

I'm bouncin' back to rap//

Da**, man your rap is crap//

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well Joe is rite..to many battle but i cant see progress :1-eek: :ohdear: ...come on think more!!

and i thought you were my biggest fan :ohdear: just kidding :lolsign:

hahaha..well im still got my hopes on u guys..but u gotta work it more...

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I'm going on a limb here, believe me....but to get better...it will take time, jus keep writing lyrics, battling isn't the way to learn better wordplay and rhymeschemes...just concentrate, and if u still can't do it, then the rap game isnt for all of us

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