Guest Prince Posted March 15, 2004 Report Share Posted March 15, 2004 Aight guys... New forum, new battle. Here are the teams, post one freestyle each in any order. Refer to the other "freestyle battle II - rules & fixtures" post for further information, don't post any questions here. Thanks. [u]Team 1[/u] Da Brakes WildWildWillennium Jazzy Julie Just_like_Will jj+fp2004 [u]Team 2[/u] Hero1 fan 4ever badboys willreign djsilvertiger :+:+:+:+:+:+:+:+:+:+:+:+: Aight set the standard and impress the judges, let's prepare for carnage! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Admin Hero1 Posted March 16, 2004 Admin Report Share Posted March 16, 2004 another freestyle battle yall just a bunch of sheep ya heard like cattle follow the same old down the same road the same rhymes afraid to step out of line frightened scared ya gonna miss this opportunity but im prepared to risk ish insist on the intrinsic linguistics that instantly impress and in fairness not even an heiress could inherit my fortune of ingenious mind mettle that invade ya brain and wrestle with your thoughts before you have to settle on the only conclusion hero1 ya choosin the man thats infusin fear in the weak minds of silly saps eat themselves alive own worst enemies result in silly raps destined for a battle bruising already accepted that you step to me you walk away losing stuck stuttering and fluttering in a daze got the judges snoozin while im cruisin to the final like ya favorite idol cowell even predicting the claiming of my rightful title and gotta give the man props for being so inciteful as i close in suddenly like nightfall a nocturnal animal black so far ahead of the competion y'all trying to impose a handicap Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jj+fp2004 Posted March 16, 2004 Report Share Posted March 16, 2004 ok listen up this is my first time battle but i'm the last person with him you wanna rumble i got what it takes to be the best in this place there's a glimpse of my skills, don't turn away your face don't even try to copy, i'm leaving with no trace just sit back and relax this is ain't no chase i'm going to do it real quick and slick please don't try me 'cause i'm close to the peak the next guy who'll call me to battle will go down, for me it ain't no trouble i'm not like 50 with his big muscled titi just another gangsta who thinks he's Don Viti my rhymes are uniqe so just flow with the bit i step in to the scene with a big wave of heat i'm ready with the mic 'cause rap is in my bone belive it or not i came tonight to get my throan smoke the place up 'cause i'm really not a layer just think again... there's no smoke without fire my real name is tomer but you can call me "Dr.T" i'm not just saying you can check for my degree so just.. 1... 2... 3 and to theee 4 your turn to speak, so for me it's time to snore after all that cocky stuff i'll be stright up i'm not like that, just wanna let you pump don't deny the rhyms who makes you wanna jump vote for me or you can shut the... *HOLD UP* Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jj+fp2004 Posted March 16, 2004 Report Share Posted March 16, 2004 i wrote "throan" instead of "crown"... so just replace "throan" with "crown"... sorry i'm stupid :dunno: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Silver Tiger Posted March 16, 2004 Report Share Posted March 16, 2004 You feel me? Yo listen close Don't steal from me This ain't like a caption contest And this ain't a place for a birdie to nest Know whata I mean? That means stop stallin You take too long and rhyme still ain't ballin Oooh Ooooh! Oh that's ya moms callin You signed up thinkin you was gonna brag to the world But once yo mouth opened The whole world hurled It's time to go Time to bring out the big guns Ta-ta-ta-ta-ta That's the sound of the coward's run But don't get mad They don't know I do this for fun Whoa dang I didn't know you ran too While you're back at your home Send me a postcard from the zoo I said you can't run forever And you said "Do the Dew!" Like you're hard to your own degree And it's freezin It's just everytime your mouth opens The whole world's sleepin God Blessa! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Members badboys Posted March 16, 2004 Members Report Share Posted March 16, 2004 It’s me, I’m back but without the numbers Badboys, rappin is one of my favourite endeavours Northern Hospitality, I’m coming from the cold Going once- Going twice- Going three times- SOLD! This cat’s spittin rhymes, and there ain’t no stoppin me You try too much dude, that is my epiphany This battle is against my partner, creating holes It’s not my fault, I’m pullin a Beyonce Knowles The end isn’t near, this has just begun I’m like Neo that’s right, I am “the one” Bring back the retro, bring back the funk Bring back the afro, bring back the dunk Redefining freestyle, but let me tell you somethin’ You’re no good, you’re not even a has been So let’s break the word freestyle into 2 different pieces I’m not talking bout bits, nor the reese’s So first we have the free, but that’s sorta wrong Yall gon’ have to pay, to hear my songs Then we got the style, which I have plenty of That’s my of way doin it when push comes to shove It’s like Jordan at ball, or Tiger at golfing Like the Williams’ at tennis, or Ali at boxing “Run like a butterfly, sting like a bee” Be realistic, you can’t be like me Round 1, have some fun, say your pun Then u done, You gon’ run, from each one Judge round 2, slow like glue, u review What to do?, déjà vu, nothing new Round 3, you can see, for me, victory Emcee, that’s me, BB, c’est la vie Last but not least, you’re overruled Forget your education, you’ve just been schooled Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Members Just_Like_will Posted March 16, 2004 Members Report Share Posted March 16, 2004 YO, it's just me/ Dark-Child, the lil' G The young MC I'm better than ever/ I'm sick of these writers, saying they are rappers/ Say good-bye to JusLike_Will, and hello to Dark-Child/ in some ways I'm the same, but the new me is so wild/ Since non of you don't got much talent, like 50 cent/ I will cut your style in half, then say it was an accident/ So, if you wanna battle me, think twice/ And, don't think that I'm gonna be nice/ I don't care if you are [color=red]DA_brakes, 3Cookies, or Tim Rice[/color]/ I'm just gonna, make you pay the price/ ya, I know what's up/ I don't only write and write, I write and rap So don't think that I'm just talkin and walkin because I don't spend much time on the computers/ like many of y'all rap pretenders. I'm not exactly sure of who I'm rapping to/ So give me somebody, and watch me split them in two/ To spit your rhymes against me, you only got one chance/ :afro: Just ounce/ So when you read my lyrics, you better not start to dance. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
WildWildWillennium Posted March 17, 2004 Report Share Posted March 17, 2004 U can call me 3W or W3, y'all know i got more flow than the Caribbean Sea But that's what u can expect from W times 3 Y'all be stutterin' like a transform scratch from Jeff - I be rappin' like FP This is LIVE...but not in Union Square It's on the JJFP.com forums so be aware Yo 2 those who haven't rapped yet, I suggest u boycott My lyrics mean somethin, they be soulful like Jill Scott Y'all be chasin' me around tryin 2 get my autograph but don't get confused Cuz my name's not Jack and i ain't no kangaroo BOOM! SHAKE SHAKE THE MESSAGE BOARD I got a few things 2 say so listen up just 4 the record Yo Hero1, hold up, stop the show U gotta create a rap before u can start a flow! Oh, that waz a rap? Sorry, must have been distracted You're just a wannabe me, with the talent subtracted djsilvertiger, hiphopremix, whatever the name, Readin' your rhymes causes MIMES 2 yell out in pain! Your lyrics, your rhymes? man they all the same My 32 lines will come down on u like the rain Badboys, I remember when we were potnas, do u remember our joints? Truth is, I waz the only one ever rackin' up the points It's a shame 2 watch u go down but ahh well so long When it's over u can go back 2 memorizin' the "Cops" theme song U think that's ridiculous? Don't, u said u had 2 use a thesaurus U said it yourself last time, u don't even know the CHORUS! Fan 4ever If u wanted someone easier u should back off right now Exit - stage left hurry up n take your bow If u take a few days 2 respond 2 my rap, that's cool cuz the judges will rule Lookin' stuff up in dictionaries sayin' "I knew I should have went on and finished elementary skool!" And willreign, I saw those raps on the last board and I was bored Chingy wannabe, seems so, rhymes are weak and u got no flow I'm as great as they come and i'm changin' the rules - The 11th commandment, W3 shall not lose Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
fan 4ever Posted March 17, 2004 Report Share Posted March 17, 2004 Drum sounds, I’m back on track on the train of life, bouncing like a jumping jack put me next 2 you, I make you look wack yo, this is not a joke nor a test this is war, better get a vest my lyrics make an impact like gun bullets my flow like Nas, representing hip hop 2 the fullest I’m killing ‘em, I line’ em up spit 16 bars when you still gotta put ya mic up got tears in my eyes cus you make me laugh with your childish flow and ya retarded staff I’m harder then a stutterer making a statement I’m so hot when I walk I burn the pavement my raps get ya stigmatised give up, you’ll never get recognized my mind capacity is 20, but yours probably half my size you think you know, but you have no idea you’ll get shot like that dude singing PIMP you act like a player but it’s more like a play-act you playback every track, that’s a fact my rhymes are like magic, they hypnotize you you’re an orange and it’s time 2 liquidize you let’s refurbish the board, take out the trash I’m sicker then your average, that’s why u and me clash every sentence I spit, I got you tongue-tied tonight’s the night that I lyrically kill you in a wordfight I’ll scalp your scalds with a scalpel leave u with the scent of death, crucify you in a chapel no need to smile, cuss I’ll knock your teeth out take a bottle and knock you over the head like puffy and steve stoute fan 4ever, put my name on top, cus you I’m out Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
willreign Posted March 17, 2004 Report Share Posted March 17, 2004 i'm sorry I can't write right now... I tried but im sooo tierd... I barlly have the power 2 write in Hebrew... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Prince Posted March 17, 2004 Report Share Posted March 17, 2004 Da Brakes, Jazzy Julie and willreign still need to post theirs. Yo Brakes, Julie, where ya at? Willreign, don't worry about not being able to reply today - there's always tomorrow. :smile: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Members eljuancho Posted March 17, 2004 Members Report Share Posted March 17, 2004 you guys soooo good, you should be rappers, really my respects Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jazzy Julie Posted March 18, 2004 Report Share Posted March 18, 2004 sorry im late again!!!!!!!!!!!! well at least im not last lol Here i am ready again to be the victorious/ Just like the last partner battle, it be so glorious/ I was an underdog, you didnt see me coming/ I was new to the game, but i hit the ground running/ yeah, in the last battle i was 100-1/ But i went and came out, and straight up won/ Now i'm too good, man, I'm way out your league/ Those rhymes your trying to spit, its sounds like mental fatigue/ I wish i could battle 50, coz i'd probably win/ and show him that a white girl from Britain can do it better than him/ I just cant believe you came back for a second try/ I slaughtered you the first time and nearly made you cry/ Now these new folks who wanna claim this prize/ Get out quick while you can, thats what i'd advise/ You think your rhymes are so dope, blowing up like a bomb/ But really you incarcerated, just like saddam/ I gotta do this right, coz i'm representing the ladies/ Watch me shine so bright, like a brand new mercedes/ you dont need drugs, coz i'm a natural stimulant/ And getting high of my flows, don't you realise its imminent/ its ok though coz all your raps sins i will condone/ I dont need a partner this time, I can make it on my own/ Just like my day job, i be putting it down like science/ and reading these rhymes its like a lyrical reliance/ Your blind to your own faults, you must have conjuctivitis/ And then making us read them all, I'm sure its just to spite us/ Be embarrassed I beat you, coz i'm little in height/ But thats ok though, I just dont need fists to fight/ My rhymes are so smart, make yours sound like a fart/ Coming straight from my heart, to tear ya apart/ I'm hear today to become the biggest Willy/ Stop laughing Brits now that joke is getting silly/ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Da Brakes Posted March 18, 2004 Report Share Posted March 18, 2004 I'm REALLY sorry guys but i'm not gonna be able t participate in this battle!! Way to many exams and assignments goin on at the moment!! Once again sorry! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Prince Posted March 18, 2004 Report Share Posted March 18, 2004 It's cool... Aight, any volunteers to replace Brakes? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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