I'm Sorry

[Its JP]

Well, I broke up with my girlfriend, and she was crying and I felt really bad lately. Plus, now I've been regretting breaking up with her. So I wrote this song about 10 minutes ago, hope you like it, sorry if you get upset about the swears in it but I wrote it like that so I'm keepin it like that, sorry if it offends you.

" I'm Sorry"

Verse 1

Yeah I fu[ked up I dont know what else there is to say

You were always there for me and I just pushed you away

I said I love you and youd always say I love you too

But how much I loved you I never even knew

From the second I said those words, I knew I ****ed up bad

I just lost the only girl who ment **** to me, the only one i ever had

I know I made you sad, and I know I made you cry

And for that I just feel like I should go and die

I'm an asshole, I can see that now

When I look back on you all I can say is wow

I sure did love you more than anyone I knew

So why did I have to be so fu[kin stupid

How the fu[k could I lose you?

How the fu[k could I allow myself to be so fu[kin dumb

Now I just take a look back on what we have become

Chorus

I never knew how I much I loved you until the day you were gone

We used to stay up on the phone from sunset to dawn

But now we're seperated, broken apart

What I did just wasn't too smart

I lost the only thing that ever ment anything to me

So all I can say is sorry, and I still love you baby

Verse 2

Theres nothin I can do or say to make everything all better

And theres nothing thats ever gonna make us forget it

I could write you a love letter, but you'd probaly just throw it away

You've got every right to hate me and feel betrayed

How the hell could I be so sense-less

Now this is some intense sh!t

I'm puttin down my defenses

I deserve to hear all the **** you have to say

Now I've got your friends yellin at me all day

Like I already didn't know that I made a mistake

I remember when we used to stay awake

On the phone, up all night, so late

How could I take your heart and let it break

I need to learn to be a man, so all this **** im gonna take

I agree with everything you say, I'm a fu[kin d!ck

Just like every other guy, and you're just like every other bitch

But what makes me and you so different

Is that we're in love, and nothin can change it

Chorus

Verse 3

I'm expressin every feelin I have, in this little rap

And you were right, I do deserve to get slapped

Right across the face, I'm a ****in disgrace

But theres a space in my heart that no one can replace

And that place is ment for you, but now its empty space

Hopefully you'll fill it again some day, and everything will be ok

All I ask for is for you to let me pay my amends

But you won't, so I'm expressin myself with a pen

This is at its end, it's had its twists and bends

And somethin tells me we won't even be friends

I asked if we could still be friends you said it depends

And 10 times out 10, it tends to never be ok again

It's all my fu[kin fault, I'm takin all the blame

Now I'm sittin here cryin, my head held down in shame

Sh!t won't ever be the same, I put out the flame

Now you won't even say my name

And I heard you're already gettin other men

If someone else had you I dont know what I'd do then

It's likely I'd go insane, sniff up some cocaine

Chug down some champagne

Then get a gun, and splatter that fu[ker's brains

But the fact remains, I put you through pain

I'm so fu[kin sorry I can feel it in my veins

So now theres only one thing I ask

Is that someday you will take me back

I know it could never be like it was before

Trust me, I swore, I wouldn't hurt you anymore

So with 4 more lines, I'll sum up this whole sh!t

I'll admit, just cuz we didn't fit

I shouldn't of given up and just split

I should of tryed my hardest to make us last

Baby I still do love you, and I hope you love my ass

Chorus

[Luigie]

wow dat was deep...if u feel so bad i understand the swears man

[Loco]

Good

[PeaceAngel]

wow dat was deep...if u feel so bad i understand the swears man

:word: That was a deep song. Good song man.

[Its JP]

thanks for the feedback

[mfuqua23]

"But how much I loved you I never even knew" - I liked that line.

"I lost the only thing that ever ment anything to me

So all I can say is sorry, and I still love you baby" - Nice touch and end to the chorus.

"Just like every other guy, and you're just like every other bitch" - I don't understand this one. If u gave reason for her receivin' the "B" label, I'd understand, but not when your so apologitic in the song. It could also be process of saying things u don't mean too. So whatever u take it for.

There's extreme feeling behind the words, so that's a plus.

[Its JP]

Well FuQ, that every guy and every bitch thing was that her and all her friends told me I was just like every other guy in the world, and when i tried to tell my friends that she was different they said she was just like every other girl and she just wanted me to buy her stuff and all that. So I hope that clears it up