Tragedy (Freestyle)

[J-o-e]

Wasup Ya'll, I know I've sort of disapearred for a while, I've been writing new stuff, I'm even starting to write a book, but I've been busy, so I'd thought I'd drop by and get ya'll opinoins for this new song I done last night...Here it is...called "Tragedy"

"Tragedy" Written By J-o-e

Looking at little kids suffering from the mist of poverty

But at the end it all it’s a tragedy and it’s hard to see

What can we be while looking for the best sports car

Living the life just to become an international superstar

We don’t have time to listen to the poor countries whine

Time for them to shine because they trying to get on fine

Things are getting harder because we can’t see it

Trying to free it but at the end we could never be It

Asking the lord forgiveness, we don’t know how to share

Or even show a little love or some comfort, a bit of care

That’s all I can bare, tell u now a tear goes down my cheek

The answers we look for but the questions is what I seek

Thing’s change when people go for high ambitions and dreams

And in this cold world nothing is what it so called seems

It’s a strange world out there, I try and speak the truth

Go to the rich end of town they asking how I chipped my tooth

So from selling petty drugs to the bigger things, cocaine

Just in this race of fame but honestly it’s all the same

So in the end of time I get mine people stealing from me

So tell me is this the end of the time I call tragedy

Remembering the days that Jay z was driving in may backs

Wearing throwbacks talking to Nas how can u say that?

In Africa they fighting for water, here we fighting for guns

To more bad steps don’t make a right one, so we’re done

Walking into the era of the crazed doped and just fiend

Girls who would sleep with u just to get some ice cream

In Vietnam they got kids digging for diamonds under slavery

Save them from he, the bad man who brought this tragedy

It’s crazy that haters could never thought I would spit like this

Like I wouldn’t go to the toilet and take a **** like this

We all the same, except the big change in the real fame

But at the end if your not famous then man you just lame

Back in the day when LL Cool J couldn’t live without a radio

Here we go back in the days when a battle was on a tight flow

But ****’s changed the cops in range so what can we do?

Turn to you and then hit you so hard that you’ll be black n blue

I don’t mean to sound rude as you but it’s not I mean to

This is a track that when u house its something u can clean to

About time for the mums to fuss and say how can he cuss

Kids are listening to him telling them how he used to bust

Not like the teenage years we far behind u when u said it

Make one more move and I’ll tell u now you’ll regret it…

:wiggle:

[mfuqua23]

"Things are getting harder because we can’t see it

Trying to free it but at the end we could never be It

Asking the lord forgiveness, we don’t know how to share

Or even show a little love or some comfort, a bit of care

That’s all I can bare, tell u now a tear goes down my cheek

The answers we look for but the questions is what I seek" - This sounded extremly well altogether.

"Remembering the days that Jay z was driving in may backs

Wearing throwbacks talking to Nas how can u say that?

In Africa they fighting for water, here we fighting for guns" - Quite honestly, this didn't draw me in to believe what you knew. Altho, it's probably right, something wouldn't let me actually "listen". It might just be me personally.

"Girls who would sleep with u just to get some ice cream" - This was like, "uh, whoa, hmm". However I thought of Master P's "Mr. Ice Cream Man". If that's what U was referring to (in the same sense), then I get it.

For a freestyle, this is quite good.

[J-o-e]

Thanks FuQ

[PeaceAngel]

"Things are getting harder because we can’t see it

Trying to free it but at the end we could never be It

Asking the lord forgiveness, we don’t know how to share

Or even show a little love or some comfort, a bit of care

That’s all I can bare, tell u now a tear goes down my cheek

The answers we look for but the questions is what I seek" - This sounded extremly well altogether.

:word: That was the best part in my opinion. Very nice freestyle Joe!! :2thumbs:

[J-o-e]

Thanks PeaceAngel...anybody else want to share there opinoins???

[Da Brakes]

Great job dude! You sure have a lot of material!

[Loco]

Good work. You should post much more stuff cos it's good

[Ace Of Spades]

feelin the flo man

[Turntable]

Love it, good job.

Back in the day when LL Cool J couldn’t live without a radio

Here we go back in the days when a battle was on a tight flow

But ****’s changed the cops in range so what can we do?

Turn to you and then hit you so hard that you’ll be black n blue

I don’t mean to sound rude as you but it’s not I mean to

This is a track that when u house its something u can clean to

About time for the mums to fuss and say how can he cuss

Kids are listening to him telling them how he used to bust

[Luigie]

:switch: props man!