markwinfield1 Posted April 14, 2006 Report Share Posted April 14, 2006 The King Of Bel-Air/ Feel it in the air/ I spark the flair they scatter like rats/ I'ma CEO no time for chatter/ I cook em like fries/ i Color em like like hair dye/ I just wrote this so... Oops wrong forum! Will Smith says SWITCH! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Vipa Posted April 14, 2006 Report Share Posted April 14, 2006 I don't wanna hate...but...That made ZERO sense, and din;t even rhyme, man. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Luigie Posted April 14, 2006 Report Share Posted April 14, 2006 I remember when i did things like dat... :lol: Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
mfuqua23 Posted April 14, 2006 Report Share Posted April 14, 2006 It's weak as any kind of chorus or verse, but for an intro, a funny, senselss one, will work. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
3cookies Posted April 14, 2006 Report Share Posted April 14, 2006 The King Of Bel-Air/ Feel it in the air/ I spark the flair they scatter like rats/ I'ma CEO no time for chatter/ I cook em like fries/ i Color em like like hair dye/ I just wrote this so... Oops wrong forum! Will Smith says SWITCH! well. it could use a little work, but to be honest, i read it, as if you were just throwin sumpthin out there 4 a quik laugh... If you ever plan on being in any of the battles against some of the JJFP fans on the site, I'd say, work on it a little bit ok??? or ull be like me... NOT competing. heh. peace, cookie Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Da Brakes Posted April 14, 2006 Report Share Posted April 14, 2006 What is it supposed to be? Verse? Chorus? Poem? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Luigie Posted April 15, 2006 Report Share Posted April 15, 2006 (edited) What is it supposed to be? Verse? Chorus? Poem? I guess its just a "lil' rhyme"..i used to do those, remember? :kekeke: Edited April 15, 2006 by Luigie Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lerkot Posted April 15, 2006 Report Share Posted April 15, 2006 "Does this suck or ?" Uhm yeah, sorry. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Don Jiggy Posted April 15, 2006 Report Share Posted April 15, 2006 whoa! im not even gonna lie, neither do i jus wanna sound like im da sh!t, but dude that had to be the worse experience of a rhyme in my life. if i never heard rap before and u were to introduce it to me, i would probably be a singer. JUS GO BACK TO FORMULA AND FOR PEACE SAKE RHYME!!!! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
J-o-e Posted April 16, 2006 Report Share Posted April 16, 2006 Erm markie mark...sorry to bust ur bubble n everyfin but u still need a bit of work...battle me and i'll show ya :lolsign: Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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