Trey Posted April 14, 2006 Report Share Posted April 14, 2006 (edited) 2... Trey - A Real MC Back in the old days, it was all good// Stop all this stuff, I know you could// Meet one good MC of the years, y'all know me// If you don't, then ya need to know your MCs// Powerful verses, great rhymes, helpin' the construction// 'Cause wit' all the gangstas, they was causing destruction// They need to know what a real MC is all about// Git your rhymes straight, this ain't a time to pout// I ain't rhymin' the same, I got a difrent concept// Wit all your cussin' you'd think your thoughts wept// Grab the mic, they'll know you'se one great MC, rocker// As you rockin' da club, you'll know you ain't gotta be proper// Messages goin' straight to your head, without you thinkin'// As us MCs, pass you can't help but start winkin'// Wishing we could go back in the day, and talk to the MCs// Tupac, Proof, other great MCs, man, I wish you were wit me// [Chorus] Some of the worlds greatest MCs are gone// Wantin' to have a powerful bond// New MCs are just arising, you know they comin'// When we hit the stage, you go start runnin'// Our messages flowin' powerfuly, without you knowin'// Man, you listen to gangsta rap, you don't know flowin'// Yo, us MCs are back to have a feestyle// If ya gonna be a MC, this is worth while// Learn from the real MCs, not the gangstas// Soon you'll learn, they just a bunch of wankstas// I'ma teach ya what a real MC is, get ready to start learnin'// They more you win your battles, the mo' you're earnin'// MC Hammer, boy, you couldn't touch this// Neither could you try and stop this// Grab the mike, doin' your thing, poppin' your colla// If ya wanna have a battle, then go on and holla// Workin' hard, soon your song'll be on the radio// People gonna be blastin' yo' song on there stereo// Take advice from us, flow wit your songs, and lines// Dude, if you write horrable, you might get fines// Now you a MC, next ya wanna be a DJ?// If ya ever in Seattle come at me & say hey!// [Chorus] [spoken] Thanks to, Fresh Prince, LL Cool J, Jay-Z, Kanye West, and all the other MCs. Rest In Peace, Tupac & Proof, and others. And thanks to those on the rise, Brotha Luigie, Rebirth, Da Brakes, Mi$ta Money, the rest y'all know. Hope to rap wit' y'all down in the industry, this is Rackler, Peace Out. © Copyright 2006 -------------------- What did y'all think? Comments please.. :1-cool: Edited May 19, 2006 by Trey Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
mfuqua23 Posted April 14, 2006 Report Share Posted April 14, 2006 "Powerful verses, great rhymes, helpin' the construction// 'Cause wit' all the gangstas, they was causing destruction//" - I really liked those set of lines. "Wishing we could go back in the day, and talk to the MCs// Tupac, Proof, other great MCs, man, I wish you were wit me//" - For being recent, I thought this was very cool. It shows a search for knowledge and different perspectives. "[Chorus] Some of the worlds greatest MCs are gone// Wantin' to have a powerful bond// New MCs are just arising, you know they comin'// When we hit the stage, you go start runnin'// Our messages flowin' powerfuly, without you knowin'// Man, you listen to gangsta rap, you don't know flowin'//" - Chorus are one of my favorite things in songs, especially if they pull a song together even better. I really liked the overall view of this. "If ya gonna be a MC, this is worth while//" - Nice prep line to tell listeners to pay attention. I see nothing with this song. The only way it's not perfect, is if you find something wrong with it. If you ever record this, I think it'd be nice over a smooth, beat buster type instrumental. One song that comes to mind is Kwame "The Rhythm". Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Trey Posted April 14, 2006 Author Report Share Posted April 14, 2006 Thank you! I appreciate it. :1-smile: Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
mfuqua23 Posted April 14, 2006 Report Share Posted April 14, 2006 btw, I'm curious, how did your rap name "Rackler" come about? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Trey Posted April 14, 2006 Author Report Share Posted April 14, 2006 (edited) :lolsign: Lets see, well one day I was eating crackers, I had been trying to get a rap name, and my previous names had falied in the public. PacMan Lava Bent Dawg Noze Then I started messin' with words that sound like crackers, I did it with a peice of pizza too. Crackler Crackerz Jackler Rackler Then I went to my friends house and asked him, and he liked it and told me to keep it, so there you have it the begining of RACKLER. :lolsign: Eh... something like that. :lolsign: I probably left some things out, but hey, this was 3 years ago! Edited April 14, 2006 by Trey Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Luigie Posted April 15, 2006 Report Share Posted April 15, 2006 U have improved :kool: Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Trey Posted April 15, 2006 Author Report Share Posted April 15, 2006 (edited) Thanks, I've been workin' on it. :1-smile: Edited April 15, 2006 by Trey Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Don Jiggy Posted April 15, 2006 Report Share Posted April 15, 2006 sounded pretty nice, the message was the highlight of course,because it seems only few of us have that talent to actually talk about somethin. good job!! i used to write stuff like dat back in da day rap names usually come in a weird way, i wont share my experience, but mine is Hemi Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest VAsFinestRenagade Posted April 15, 2006 Report Share Posted April 15, 2006 it was good i have had 5 names and only use 2 now Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Trey Posted April 15, 2006 Author Report Share Posted April 15, 2006 Thanks y'all! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Pakalicous Posted April 18, 2006 Report Share Posted April 18, 2006 I like your style Trey. I get a feeling that you really like old school? Props for doing your thing man.. Peace Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Trey Posted April 18, 2006 Author Report Share Posted April 18, 2006 Thanks man, yeah the old school is dope! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Loco Posted April 20, 2006 Report Share Posted April 20, 2006 Very good but: Man, you listen to gangsta rap, you don't know flowin'// -I'm not feelin' that line because there is a lot of good and very emotional gangsta rap too. But i think you mean all the crap everybody is hearin'. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ash trey Posted April 20, 2006 Report Share Posted April 20, 2006 Nice Effort Trey! But yeah u can't say dat ppl who listen to Gangsta rap know nothing of flow! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Trey Posted April 20, 2006 Author Report Share Posted April 20, 2006 I ment, the horrable gangsta rap that really has no flow. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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