My Remix

[dkny2kx]

Now every sunday mass I'll always attend

Jesus spoke to me and sparked my pen

He said don't rap about things you don't relate to

Keep your head in focus, stay in school

Cause the music industry is out to get you

transform you into something allota rappers do

Smoke the Chronic, Drink the Tonic

and drop your pants past your jewls

and then tell you that's how you're gonna rule

But No uh-uh, that's-not how i'm gonna roll

toss the liq and the weed right into that bowl

because making it as a rapper is one of my goals

and making good music is what's really in my soul

anythoughts

it might be mellow dramatic

[Luigie]

:hmm:

[J-o-e]

That's a bit short if your not singing it for the hate it or love it instrumental aint it. but otherwise ur slowley getting there, keep it up man

[Da Brakes]

Yeah thats a pretty good message your putting out there, but I agree if you want to make it a song it needs to be a bit longer than that. Have you recorded any of it so we can hear?

[dkny2kx]

Thats just the second half... I've got my intro and my end in edit for now.

[Loco]

pretty short but good

[dkny2kx]

Thanks for all of that... but its only the second verse