Da Brakes Posted April 26, 2006 Report Share Posted April 26, 2006 Hey guys! I've finished a new track and its called 'Lyrical Fitness'. I'd appreciate the listens and feedback as well. Lyrical Fitness - Da Brakes :stickpoke: Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Luigie Posted April 26, 2006 Report Share Posted April 26, 2006 Another cool job Brakes, sound really cool, iono if its just me but ur rap was more quick these time, i couldnt understand the whole thing :kekeke: Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Da Brakes Posted April 26, 2006 Author Report Share Posted April 26, 2006 Lyrical Fitness - Da Brakes (Copyrighted so don't copy! Right!) Man I’m only 21 and I ain’t reached my peak yet My success well it’s a well kept secret My feet get weary, eyes they’re getting bleary But still I keep on running, I’m coming you better fear me Clearly my stamina is what sets me apart When that voice says stop, man I dig into my heart Keep on going; I’m steady flowing, steady rocking a poem When I’m damaging mics, you getting locked in the moment So unique my technique is sweet Boy my tongue is blessed, let the words I speak Elevate your mind, its takes you too a higher level Subliminal messages makes you wanna buy my record (ha) Silver tongue, I got a way with words You better duck right down when I spray these verbs Coz there lethal, believe too, that nobodies equal No matter what they say DB will defeat you So people, embrace this new revolution Hate not player, just step, get to moving This fusion of rap is clean but still street Ain’t no stopping this beast, when I’m speak on ill beats Man your hopeless you’re lacking, I’ll choke you for bragging You know you don’t want it with this vocal assassin Just imagine if I tried at rapping Oh! The damage, you don’t want that to happen The fact remains, I stay top of my game These crazy lyrics, nah they’re not for the sane Keep on bopping and saying, Brakes is rocking again Ain’t no chopping and changing, you ain’t stopping this train kid Once was nameless, but looky now I’m famous Don’t produced wastage, can’t call me anus A regular rapper? Please my name ain’t Joe Bloggs You know that it’s me when you hear “Oh Gosh!” CHORUS Can you buss rhymes bro and spit like me? NO Can you get the party jumping and moving and screaming? NO Can you finish MC’s when they challenge you? NO Could you ever phase me? I reckon I could if..…… NO Can you carry your weight in this rap game? NO Well that ain’t a surprise, because you lack pace! OH You ain’t got my wit, no need to riddle me this Coz if you wanna be criss, you best be lyrically fit Let me lay back and kick this, no guns or pimping I’m thinking the ink in my pen is ridiculous Witness the skill, I’m sick, tipped for big things This is for real, don’t trip I got big dreams Step back from the plate if D Brakes is ripping it You seem to be in a bit of a critical predicament You’re out of your depth; this is survival of the fittest I don’t just rap, Hip Hop bro I’m living it My lyrics be so cutting they’ll snap you’re pencil Go against this, tempt this, I’m temperamental I’m offensive not to mention, not pretentious Rap from the heart, my lyrics can’t be questioned Long ago unknown like John Doe Now all across the globe, my songs are well known It’s the takeover, UK raps makeover New breed of MC, playtime is over As an artist you couldn’t break thru If they named you something like 1 ply toilet tissue Don’t avoid the issue, even you’re boys will diss you I’m a poisonous little annoying royal dizude Plans get foiled, and I make them plots fizzle You say you got flow, best believe I got triple The plot thickens, don’t’ drop knowledge? I drop riddles You trying to spit flow, you can just about dribble Refuse to believe it, your oozing with weakness I’m not leaving here until his bruised and he’s bleeding You confused? Dude, it aint hard to take to it Watch a master at work whilst I’m sipping my Brake fluid Yeah you might wanna step, you ain’t my calibre yet Whilst you running out of breath I ain’t even broke a sweat Say that I’m wack but you know its not true Your only say it coz you know I’m better than you. Chorus x 2 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Luigie Posted April 26, 2006 Report Share Posted April 26, 2006 (edited) -Subliminal messages makes you wanna buy my record (ha) -Boy my tongue is blessed, let the words I speak Dis 2 lines capturated my attention, genius! now i just change sum words and i can make a new song j/k Edited April 26, 2006 by Luigie Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jonny 5 Posted April 26, 2006 Report Share Posted April 26, 2006 best song I've heard from you Brakes... loving that :2thumbs: Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Big Willie Posted April 26, 2006 Report Share Posted April 26, 2006 Dope! You just keep getting better dude, amazing track! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jazzy Julie Posted April 26, 2006 Report Share Posted April 26, 2006 I agree, you really do keep getting better. Like i said before i love the sample u used too. Great job! :2thumbs: Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
cristigolo Posted April 26, 2006 Report Share Posted April 26, 2006 i love it brakes. it's going on my phinie and ino heavy rotation at school during classes Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Da Brakes Posted April 26, 2006 Author Report Share Posted April 26, 2006 Thanks for all the positive comments guys! Appreciate it! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest VAsFinestRenagade Posted April 26, 2006 Report Share Posted April 26, 2006 hot straight fire i wanna hear make an agressive record Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
mfuqua23 Posted April 26, 2006 Report Share Posted April 26, 2006 (edited) A new chapter in Da Brakes journey. This is a very nice and aggressive track. I think this song has the biggest potential to be extremely widespread versus all your others. I really liked the power of the chorus when you said "No". You lived up to the track title as well, "Lyrical Fitness" is right. I also liked the change up of your delivery. Edited April 26, 2006 by mfuqua23 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lerkot Posted April 26, 2006 Report Share Posted April 26, 2006 Extremely good. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kbfprince Posted April 26, 2006 Report Share Posted April 26, 2006 Excellent track Brakes! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mike Posted April 26, 2006 Report Share Posted April 26, 2006 wow, thats amazing, makes me want to be good but seriouesly thats extremely good. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Da Brakes Posted April 27, 2006 Author Report Share Posted April 27, 2006 Thanks guys! :2thumbs: Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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