J-o-e Posted April 29, 2006 Report Share Posted April 29, 2006 (edited) Wasup ya'll, thought I'd drop this to see what ya'll think.... There is a spot open for another verse if anyone wants to feature on it Letters From The Past. I’m Counting These Letters From The Past Visions Of Being In Gym Class, Picked Last I’m Steadily Reading Letters From The Past Haters Telling Me I Should Spit More Fast U want it done I’ll do it for fun murder one got that son? Leave the gun throw it in the river no more time to run I’ve already accepted that I always get rejected, infected Intercepted reasons for the reasons I’m ill from shítI’ve injected Think I’m kidding man I’ll telling u I’m tired of bidding Tired of sinning when I’m not winning, but it’s forbidding Contradicted while these haters think I’m inflicted Rap’s my art so I’m addicted, it’s exactly what I predicted We all die someday so why can’t we make the pain go away Youths go astray while they parents stump butts on an astray Letters from the past, from the west, some from the east Steadily trying to make peace on the streets where there’s beef MC’s debate whether there hot, but there not, missed they shot No album dropped, my album didn’t flop, new bens I’ll cop Hitting the haters regardless, heartless when I’ll just address it This rap sh*t I finesse it, these fool’s I’ll just impress them.. I’m Counting These Letters From The Past Visions Of Being In Gym Class, Picked Last I’m Steadily Reading Letters From The Past Haters Telling Me I Should Spit More Fast Back when I was young and I started to, be in the dope game Dealing cocaine, not profane don’t complicate your brain People settle for some wood, I’d just have some chronic Asking Joe you said it would be too good, getting girls hypnotic I just live on the edge and try to miss it, MC’s I’ll just diss it I can’t address it because that means I’ll get there wife n kiss it Miss me too late I’m gone, your all alone what u going to do? Can’t get the phone, it was disconnected I’ll come and get you Don’t call me crazy you’ll just set me off before the bet be off Don’t you dare let me off, just cough and then sweat a lot I’ll drop the scenario when I went to flow, can’t hack no more Don’t fúck no hoe, I’ll be chilling smoking cheek chang and cho. But no! think straight before we start all of the accusations Infatuations because nations can’t hack the nerve for some rations Can’t ya’ll think straight for the fate of this earth for what it’s worth Since big went in a hearse I’ll spit a verse to stop this before it gets worse I don’t want to see anybody killed, I’m serious for I’ll tell u right now Mic down put your fists man I’m ready to fight now I’m Counting These Letters From The Past Visions Of Being In Gym Class, Picked Last I’m Steadily Reading Letters From The Past Haters Telling Me I Should Spit More Fast Edited April 29, 2006 by J-o-e Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Da Brakes Posted April 30, 2006 Report Share Posted April 30, 2006 Your wordplay and rhyme scheme was really good in this one! I think you've come such a long way since you first started out. i like a lot of the imagery in this as well. Have you recorded any stuff yet? It'd be interesting to see how your lyrics transcends onto the mc. My only qualm with this is you rapping about things you might not necessarily live. Sooner or later people will start calling you out for that! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
J-o-e Posted April 30, 2006 Author Report Share Posted April 30, 2006 Thanks Brakes, Nah I havent started recording yet, I should be getting a mic soon lol...and I was only blagging...it's nothing serouis plus this is on the 4th album I've wrote...so by then I will live it haha.... Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Loco Posted April 30, 2006 Report Share Posted April 30, 2006 Good lyrics :2thumbs: , but try to use more doublerhymes. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Luigie Posted April 30, 2006 Report Share Posted April 30, 2006 nice work there J-o-e :2thumbs: Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Don Jiggy Posted April 30, 2006 Report Share Posted April 30, 2006 good one, i liked it i would bust one but im in da library and this sorta aint where my mode reacts, oh yeah joe u done got fye since the last time we used to battle. i might bust a lil freestyle do wut u feel if its real whether its skateboardin or blastin da steel i can feel da hostility when they witness me out and about skatin,not a z-boy but a beginner is wut im ratin da impression of my expression is free so its only common i skateboard,freestyle, and BE damn i wish i had a home computer,holla Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
PeaceAngel Posted May 1, 2006 Report Share Posted May 1, 2006 Very nice song man! I agree with Brakes, the rhyme scheme was really good! Nice flow too! :2thumbs: Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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