Admin Hero1 Posted May 6, 2006 Admin Report Share Posted May 6, 2006 Emotions don’t let em overpower you Take over they’ll rain and shower you And they can rip you apart Then you finished and back to the start Its an endless cycle And its libel to end in trouble the strife will Cause hurt and pain It’s the endless strain That breaks down the senses And leaves you senseless Defenseless To the pretences A life sentence Cause it’s the same old **** He said she said and you left with it Emotions come into play and you feel it You try to leave it But this mess has got you seething The stress has got you reeling Common sense is leaving You pleading For a break You realize whats at stake And how much it will take To dig yourself out of the mire Gonna take more than shower to overcome the fire Cause if you get so caught up In whats in front of you You lose your vision, lose your sight overcome dark with light Theres more meaning in life Than the meaning of life But if you don’t search for the answers Close your mind, it’ll act like a cancer Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
mfuqua23 Posted May 6, 2006 Report Share Posted May 6, 2006 I seen this a a myspace blog, and I still feel the same. "Cause it’s the same old **** He said she said and you left with it" - So so true. "Common sense is leaving" - Tim, u got words that make people think and realize they're missing something so simple. "Theres more meaning in life Than the meaning of life" - :hmm: Gotta think about that one. It's certainly been one thing that has boggled my mind. "But if you don’t search for the answers Close your mind, it’ll act like a cancer" - Nice simile and ending. Did anything special cause you to come up with this? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Luigie Posted May 6, 2006 Report Share Posted May 6, 2006 (edited) dat was a philosopher flowin! :wickedwisdom: Edited May 6, 2006 by Luigie Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Admin Hero1 Posted May 7, 2006 Author Admin Report Share Posted May 7, 2006 I seen this a a myspace blog, and I still feel the same. "Theres more meaning in life Than the meaning of life" - :hmm: Gotta think about that one. It's certainly been one thing that has boggled my mind. I'm saying you cant just think about whats the meaning in life..what am i doin all the time...BUT But if you don’t search for the answers Close your mind, it’ll act like a cancer" - Nice simile and ending.if you dont even look..its gonna hurt you Did anything special cause you to come up with this? Yeah haha.. I was really annoyed..emotions had definitely got the better off me.. it was an experience...that has happened b4.. quite a few times actually..and i'm thinkin if i've been through this b4..why am i gettin upset.. i should expect this :chuks: Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
PeaceAngel Posted May 7, 2006 Report Share Posted May 7, 2006 Very cool Tim, I liked that! :2thumbs: Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Da Brakes Posted May 7, 2006 Report Share Posted May 7, 2006 another great job Tim Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Pakalicous Posted May 7, 2006 Report Share Posted May 7, 2006 Nice one Tim.. "Cause hurt and pain It’s the endless strain That breaks down the senses And leaves you senseless Defenseless To the pretences A life sentence" - That's that sh*t.. Great flow right there.. Peace Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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