Its JP Posted May 6, 2006 Report Share Posted May 6, 2006 Yeah, I wrote this last night, and some of it doesn't rhyme, doesn't flow, whatver, i dont care, i dont really carewhat you think about it, i know it swears, well i write with swears, so look past it. I'm sick and tired of missin on out the **** that I desire No matter what I do, somebodys always higher Always gettin out-shined, always gettin out-rhymed I'll never be the best no matter how hard I try Sometime I just feel like quittin, **** spittin Throw in the towel, I'm sick of the **** that I'm gettin But if I was to ever qive up, I wouldn't live up To what I promised I'd accomplish Said I'd never fall behind, Always be on top of this You bitches ain't stoppin this The more you criticize, the more of you bitches die And eat your own words, I'll defeat you posers You mother****ers who think that you better than me Why? Cuz you mother****ers said **** to me No matter what you say, I'm waitin for the day When we meet face to face, It'll be a different case I'll show you ****in jackasses, who has the laughs and Giggles, you so called criminals, you bitches Watch as I spit this, its a lyrical miracle You bitches don't fear me though When I should be what you're most afraid of Cuz I'm roastin haters, boastin skills the most debated, force the chills I'll give you useless chumps the goosebumps I say one line and draws drop Grab my balls and ya'll stop You wanna call me a wigger, tryin to judge me When you know nothin about me, tryin to shove me Try and start some ****, see what happens Yeah I'm white bitch, you see me rappen And you just can't stand it, sayin its my fault I rap Like I just planned it Like I really want to get judged, and called a wigger Say it again man, I'll become a grave digger Throw you right in, bury you alive Get ready man, cuz I have arrived The new rookie, and lookie, he's white Not only he's white, but he's livin a good life Not from the hood, this **** ain't right But this kid's tight I'm the ****, admit it, you ain't gotta hide it You loved it when you first heard it It was absurd, you were let speechless Tryin to reach this, left you whiter than bleach bitch I'm not a preacher or a teacher I'm not a thug or gangster I'm not a wigger or a prankster I'm me, and thats all I'll ever be Not pretendin to be ****, I'm endin this G **** I'm spendin my weekends, in my room puttin together these raps But for what? where am I goin with that Sometimes the only way I say what I want, is with a pen But then it happens again, I freeze up, I can't think I blink, the words disappear from my mind Like this rhyme just went away in front of my own eyes But wheres it gonna get me, where will I end up So what if I can rap, the **** is pointless Sorry for the disappointment But I don't give a **** how you feel I don't give a ****, im ideal I'm what you wanna be, and I know it The look in your eyes shows it I can see it all, right on the ball But I will stand tall, I will not fall I'll live though it all And when the worst comes to worst I'll pick up a pen and as this **** just gets worse I'll holler and curse in a verse But what does it do for me, Rap doesnt want nothin to do with me Cuz I'm the wrong color, wrong age Come from the wrong place, with the wrong name But I got the skills, I got the song for the game I can spill my heart out on a track Doesn't that mean ****? I spit rhymes so fast its like my mouth is an uzi Then I look around at you tryin to abuse me That ****s confusing You used to be with me, now you against me **** you dawg, I don't need friends **** Friendship, I've been in **** My friends never came to help me out Friends are bull****, just somethin to talk about Cuz nobody really gives a **** about anyone Including me and you, You don't give a **** about me And I don't give a **** if you do. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest VAsFinestRenagade Posted May 6, 2006 Report Share Posted May 6, 2006 and u dis 50 cuz of how raps when u rap da same way that was not good at all Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Luigie Posted May 6, 2006 Report Share Posted May 6, 2006 JP is passin really bad times now :shakehead: Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
mfuqua23 Posted May 6, 2006 Report Share Posted May 6, 2006 Yeah, I wrote this last night, and some of it doesn't rhyme, doesn't flow, whatver, i dont care, i dont really carewhat you think about it, i know it swears, well i write with swears, so look past it. With that kind of attitude, why bother? Personally, I thought the verse was ridiculous. I know a weakmind when I see one. Whatever's going on in there, I think you need to check. And if you know rhymes like this aren't appreciated on this forum, again why bother? Find a forum that is if it bugs you that much. ------- 1. If more than one user account is registered with the same IP address you will be automatically banned. 2. Do not talk to people in posts, asking them to chat etc, use the PM feature if you want to send a message to someone 3. Do not go ridiculously off topic in posts, we are more lenient in the caught in the middle off topic forum, but if you are posting nonsense in a serious on topic discussion you will be banned. 4. Do not lie, thats an automatic ban 5. Do not pretend to be anyone that you are not 6. Do not harass other members of the forum 7. Do not swear, this is a family friendly forum, a lot of younger people around, and Will doesnt curse in his records and we try to uphold that here 8. Do not post any pornographic material 9. Do not spam 10. Do not take something from this forum and post it elsewhere without first getting the permission from the member who originally posted that material. 11. Do not unnessecarily bring up old posts 12. Don't harass people with PMs 13. Don't Post copyrighted material 14. Do not flame posts if you have a problem with someone take it to PMs -------- I'm sure we've all been minorly guilty of these, myself included, but we still need to uphold the class of this forum, and being fans of JJFP. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
J-o-e Posted May 10, 2006 Report Share Posted May 10, 2006 I really don't know whatsup with u these days JP, but I couldnt read it after the first 4 lines, I'm sorry but FuQ's got a point, If u take this attitude to hip hop why like hip hop at all, We are all trying to make it stronger and I know don't want negative rap As it comes to cussing in Ur songs, well that's Ur choice, I can't say I havent done it because I'd be called a hypocrit, even If i have had alot of emotion like anger and rage, I do write the songs but they certainly are never posted and hardly ever seen.... But don't take this as a bad gesture or something...try and keep your head up and you'll see the bright light soon enough... Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Pakalicous Posted May 10, 2006 Report Share Posted May 10, 2006 I really don't know whatsup with u these days JP, but I couldnt read it after the first 4 lines, I'm sorry but FuQ's got a point, If u take this attitude to hip hop why like hip hop at all, We are all trying to make it stronger and I know don't want negative rap As it comes to cussing in Ur songs, well that's Ur choice, I can't say I havent done it because I'd be called a hypocrit, even If i have had alot of emotion like anger and rage, I do write the songs but they certainly are never posted and hardly ever seen.... But don't take this as a bad gesture or something...try and keep your head up and you'll see the bright light soon enough... :word: :word: :word: :word: Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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