been there

[Hero1]

You been there? I been here deep despair

You seen? yeah! Serious damage need repair

See where rare, plots thicken synopsis stick and

build drops glistenin, and mist risen incisive incisions

for derisive divisions, because you tripped on the listenin

flipped out! you kidden, ripped! and insistin you wishin

for good luck admittin, you're downfall is what you're riskin

true friendship is whisked in, but stirred to a conistency thats missin

real vision so your steel mission is wasted, just aint what you tasted

you flaked a pastry faced it and faded cause you misplaced it

thats trust build on understanding, reaching for common ground demanding

two parties start the landing of planes of meditation chancing

mental stimulation but you tardy and hardly stacking grace

you lacking race fitness, and that can sting you like women packing mace

tactics faze the laziest of plays, thought unravelled for all who got betrayed

you came in and got sprayed, gazed in and wish you never stayed

I never strayed whether grade A, saw opportunity and made hay

now it's a new day, and how your viewed mate

depends on choices of the new brigade, soon to stake

a claim and invade, the consciousness and due to take

the jewels of life, friendship buildin doin what right

good deeds shine bright, helpful people in the spotlight

the rest get left behind, invest and keep in time

chime in stay on the grind, best stress test is the mind

verbal stoushes just knocked down houses

the foundations are layed in, from friends, mothers, spouses

not the way you came in, looking for affirmation

your depth stayed thin, and thats not how to build relations

[mfuqua23]

"See where rare, plots thicken synopsis stick and

build drops glistenin, and mist risen incisive incisions

for derisive divisions, because you tripped on the listenin" - An addictive delivery.

"true friendship is whisked in, but stirred to a consistency thats missin";

"best stress test is the mind" - Two lines I personally liked.

I really liked the depth of the lyrics for this one compared to your others. Your lyrics have certainly been on a move as of late, haven't they? :2thumbs:

[Hero1]

I'm feeling creative.. so i'm just writing :kekeke:

[MissAshley]

"best stress test is the mind"

^totally and 100% true..I've said it before and i'll say it again, LOVE your ability to hold on to your rhyme scheme...you really insipire me Tim....so keep on "just writing"