Admin Hero1 Posted May 10, 2006 Admin Report Share Posted May 10, 2006 intrinsically emotive and spoke with the sharpest of wit simply the dopest educator and entertainer he'd rarely fail ya stories of the past would help explain the farce the shroud the cloud hanging over this loud and rambunctious youngster twisted tongue that wowed see under all that exterior, was a broken interior a wall a fortress like eddie delirous felt inferior had to cover up the other stuff swept away and piled up the deepest of pain heavy rains had riled up a deep underbelly dampened spirits but he played it carefree you would never know, the way this man put on a show he barely showed his true soul, fold his deep holes there were very few who knew the depth of his pain and unrealized goals but when everyones laughin and enjoying the goodwill how would you suspect the suffering, intervention was futile and soon we'll see what he thought would make him feel free the actions that sustained a result of deep childhood pain it was a negative gain, that compounded and grounded all his fears the cover up shut everyone up, but the real hurt dug into his core for years and there's only so far he could go before he froze behind the smiles the laughter, the tension on his face the strain shows but nobody noticed those, his girlfriend he proposed suddenly a changing of fortune, spirits lifted for his rose forgetting the past, a toast they were jealous of the man, and his engagement party pose he had life in a stranghold but thats when he got entangled a sheer twist of fate, left him bruised and mangled see before the bride got married she wanted a break just some time off so she could realize whats at stake determine if the choice was right and true love was their fate the alter was in sight, so things were still looking great but thats when she met a new mate on a new date and it quickly turned the engagement broken off the girl he yearned for had simply burned his one and only path out of his bloody bath depression quickly stepped in crept in mouth aghast all the pain he'd swept to the side with no one to confide had broken him in two the greatest of divide the palms are sweaty as he grips the revolver his only problem solver like a damn bursting emotions simply flew in past memories had refused to use him now simply grown beyond his own distractions everyone loved this clown, but few could forecast his actions he brought joy to them all, but that was his greatest downfall the masquerade had played its final sharade its final call the sun rises on a new day, grab the paper check the news today the community was completely shocked, this town completely rocked the local hero found down by the rocks two men found shot dead weapon in the jesters hand bodies lay silently the mans uncle, the boys last stand Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Silver Tiger Posted May 10, 2006 Report Share Posted May 10, 2006 That's great! Nice job! God Blessa! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
mfuqua23 Posted May 12, 2006 Report Share Posted May 12, 2006 Very good use of words there Tim. And a good grasping story. "the cover up shut everyone up, but the real hurt dug into his core for years" - I thought this line was attractive when I read it. "he brought joy to them all, but that was his greatest downfall"- For those taken advantage of, I can certainly relate. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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