Trey Posted May 22, 2006 Report Share Posted May 22, 2006 5... Trey - Tha Beast Yo, y’all know me as Tha Beast// My rhymes ain’t like a ghetto feast// Mess wit me, I’ll diss you so hard, you'll cry// My raps will awe you. You’ll be wondering why// Advanced not only in lyics, but in motion// My songs are as big as the Indian Ocean// Travlin’all over the globe to preform would be dope// You couldn’t catch me, even wit a steel rope// Tha beast is after ya. Whatcha gonna do?// Me and my boy, Mi$ta, will beat da crap outta you// I ain’t no huslter, just call me a survivor// My raps will rip flesh, like a black viper// Slash y’all wit my wip of lyrics, it’ll make ya bleed// Rappin’crap about me, you dirty weed// There’s a beast in everyone, just gotta let it reign// You gotta have a reason fo’ it, don't just make it plain// [Chorus] Tha Beast, is comin’ to rap// (to rap!) He's gonna defeat your crap// (yo crap!) Tha Beast, fires are as hot as hell// (hell yeah!) Once he’s outta you, you couldn't sell// (couldn’t sell!) Tha Beast, rhymes are like solid stone// (solid stone!) Unleash your beast, let it rome the zone// (in da zone!) I’ve seen your beast, it ain't pretty// My rhymes are as big as New York City// Came from the ol' skool rhymers, to change this new school// Y’all runied the ol' school, and made the new one gangsta, fool// Battled lots of great rappers, and a lot of bad rhymers// Tha Beast doesn’t take long to spit, you can use a timer// Rackler is comin’for ya to rule dis place// My raps are gonna be heard by every race// I’m here to change hip-hop, not destory it// Lets get to work, dawg, and repair it// Rapped for ages, never consiterd this fortune// My song will burn you, boy you’ll be scorchin'// Roasted lyics on a grill, written just write// The way you rhyme, you’ll always start a fight// I am Tha Beast don't try and diss me// Or you'll be dissed harder, by a better MC// [Chorus] Final battle, get ready to be owned// Talk like that, get ready to be phoned// Once my work is done, y’all will be greatfull// BUT right now, all dis stuff is shamefull// My deepness will draw you in, make ya listen// Fool wanna fight me. Lets get on wit da dissin'// The beat is sharp, so don’t cut ya self// Scared of my rhymes? Go head south// When you put my CD into the car, ya gotta blast the song// Unlike other rhymers, I know what's right and wrong// C’mon y’all snap yo fingers, and rock wit it// Do yo’ thing on the flo’, go on and lean wit it// Evolution, my raps are evolving, turning into classics// Camouflaged rhymes, go on hommie, and mask it// From junior to legend, that's what I’m wantin’// Just ask Rebirth, he'll tell ya why y'all are frontin’// [Chorus x 2 fade..] © Copyright 2006 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
mfuqua23 Posted May 22, 2006 Report Share Posted May 22, 2006 It was decently written. I imagine your just starting out? Just explore writting. Maybe try to input some multi-rhymes. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Trey Posted May 22, 2006 Author Report Share Posted May 22, 2006 Maybe try to input some multi-rhymes. What do ya mean? :hmm: Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
mfuqua23 Posted May 22, 2006 Report Share Posted May 22, 2006 Like rhyming within a line, for example Rakim's "I Ain't No Joke" "I ain't no joke, I used to let the mic smoke/" Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Members Mista Money Posted May 22, 2006 Members Report Share Posted May 22, 2006 I thought it was dope. But, thats just me. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Trey Posted May 22, 2006 Author Report Share Posted May 22, 2006 Like rhyming within a line, for example Rakim's "I Ain't No Joke" "I ain't no joke, I used to let the mic smoke/" Oh okay, but that's not my style. I'll look into it, though. :kekeke: Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Luigie Posted May 23, 2006 Report Share Posted May 23, 2006 wat FuQ said makes the song better i used in one of my songz dat. "Sometimes I spit good lines, other times nothin in mind" :2thumbs: Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Trey Posted May 25, 2006 Author Report Share Posted May 25, 2006 Yeah, thanks for the comment man! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Turntable Posted May 25, 2006 Report Share Posted May 25, 2006 I do lines like that sometimes, but thats caus I cant find a rhyme for the line above it. Anway, I guess its nice. I`m heaving hard time writing an jugding lyrics like that. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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