Trey Posted May 28, 2006 Report Share Posted May 28, 2006 (edited) Trey & Pakalicous - Milez of Jamz (Trey) Yo, so we be flowin’ to dis jam Grabin’ da mic, we be like wham Hotta then lava, colda then ice Addin’ some mo suger & spice Yeah, Pak gonna beat da crap outta you You don’t want him to prove to ya it’s true Do what ya do, you gonna be a sucess Some of those jamz you talk about are a mess We M.C.s who like to play wit the mic No gangsta clothes, we got a tux and Nikeeeeeee We hold da dopest jamz, parted starded Rockin’ wit it ya, make da parties parted Pak gonna be like Snoop, messin’ wit yo mind I’ma be like Kanye, record a dope find People screamin’ our name, we be rollin’ in hot cars Hommie, mess wit one of us, you gonna see stars So this is the milez of jamz, you gotta feel this beat Y’all who’ve never heard us befo, you’re in fo a treat [Chorus (both)] We be bringing you the Milez of (What what?) The Milez of(What what?) The Milez of(What what?) (The Milez of Jamz) We bringing Milez of(What what?) The Milez of(What what?) The Milez of(What what?) (The Milez of Jamz) (Pakalicous) Baby bring out the cake and fellas pump your brakes like Big Willie in Philly I will have a cheesesteak Im startin from the base, you never stopped with the hatte I never left, so why yall screamin “Welcome Back” like Mase “You wanna ball with the kid, watch your step you might fall” (Sample) Try to spit like i did, I was Uhhh you was Aaaa Now you wrong with that sh*t, you sound way to much gay We’ll party Like N.W.A, Cube aka Trey and Im Dre Straight outta Norway, I wont stop until the mic is dead Instead, Im laid back drinking and “gettin some he*d” Im getting more cred, STOP you be bettin your bread Stop dancing like a moron, you making a fool outta yourself We bring you the "Miles of Jamz", now scream if you feel this and pop your collar and pretend like you doing it big Who’s that kid? Thats the illest Paki who is livin it With Trey he be kickin it, Wont Stop. He’ll keep spittin it [Chorus three times fade..] Hope y'all like it! :smart: Edited June 6, 2006 by Trey Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Loco Posted May 28, 2006 Report Share Posted May 28, 2006 I think trey has to work harder. I really like pak's verse Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Pakalicous Posted May 30, 2006 Report Share Posted May 30, 2006 Thanks man.. I dont usually write any partysongs.. I had to try it.. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Luigie Posted May 30, 2006 Report Share Posted May 30, 2006 Nice work :2thumbs: Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Trey Posted May 30, 2006 Author Report Share Posted May 30, 2006 I think trey has to work harder. Yeah, I wrote my verse in a hurry. Wasn't my best. :shrug: Nice work :2thumbs: Thanks Luigie :thumbsup: Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
thePrince Posted May 31, 2006 Report Share Posted May 31, 2006 I think trey has to work harder. Yeah, I wrote my verse in a hurry. Wasn't my best. :shrug: I agree with Loco for both things. I'm feeling Pak's verse. Trey can I ask why you wrote it in a hurry? And why finalise it if you know it isn't your best? You should always put 100% effort into what you write. Be a perfectionist. Go through it again and again until you're completely happy with it. Otherwise, what's the point in writing at all? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Luigie Posted May 31, 2006 Report Share Posted May 31, 2006 I read pak's verse more carefully dis time, its hype, n yeah Trey i know u workin wit us n all dat, but its better to make few excellent songz, than lots of "decent" ones. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Trey Posted May 31, 2006 Author Report Share Posted May 31, 2006 (edited) Okay... I'll re-write my verse since ya'll thought it was bad. And it might take a while, though. Edited May 31, 2006 by Trey Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Pakalicous Posted May 31, 2006 Report Share Posted May 31, 2006 Thanks for the comments ppl.. Im glad u guys liked it. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
J-o-e Posted June 1, 2006 Report Share Posted June 1, 2006 That was good guys...I agree with the others aswell...Trey u my homie n everything, but ya need to concentrate a little harder and get that sudden burst of inspiration from somewhere....keep trying you'll only get better... And pakalicouis that was a good verse man...keep it up ya'll Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Trey Posted June 1, 2006 Author Report Share Posted June 1, 2006 (edited) Yeah, I'm definatly gonna re-write my verse to my liking. Maybe make it a bit mo "gangsta" :lolsign: Thanks for da comments y'all. Anyone else like to diss me on my horrable verse? :rofl: Edited June 1, 2006 by Trey Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
J-o-e Posted June 1, 2006 Report Share Posted June 1, 2006 Nah it wasn't horrible or bad or anything...we just believe u have more talent than your showing us...don't think we're disrespecting u or nefin :lolsign: but we all know ur new at this and ur not going to be the best in split second...keep it up and concentrate hard on ya work and you'll be fine... Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Da Triptic Posted June 1, 2006 Report Share Posted June 1, 2006 i dont like it every thing Trey does a collab is a party try sumtin new Pal's was ok Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Pakalicous Posted June 3, 2006 Report Share Posted June 3, 2006 Thanx for the feedback ppl.. anyone else? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Trey Posted June 6, 2006 Author Report Share Posted June 6, 2006 Just finished re-doing my verse! Hope y'all like the new one! :2thumbs: Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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