mfuqua23 Posted August 1, 2004 Report Share Posted August 1, 2004 I didn't type it the why it'z wrote. That way, it'z better 2 read. Not that the other's really complicated. [i]Jan 10, 2003 (7:15 p.m.) - Jan 16, 2003 (7:40 p.m.)[/i] [b]CHORUS[/b] Pick Up Ur Tears 4 me Don't want U 2 cry U'll be aight Now dry ya eyes Whoever caused U pain Done played the wrong game U know I've gone thru similar 4 U I feel the same What went wrong girl?, U was doin good wit ur pure lovin U gave 2 much of ya heart but the mistake wasn't easy 2 realize, U kept lookin 4 love in return but couldn't see in his eyes I remember when he turned from U and walked away I wanted 2 comfort U, but ur friends told me 2 stay away And that'z when I knew ur heart was shredded up Them bitches and that mutha****a had U set up My homies thought I took pity cuz U was pretty It was like they saw one house, but I saw the whole city People look 2 easy and they never look enuff U can cry all U want, and they won't give a **** I can see more in 5 minutes then they can see in a day That'z how I know I look 4 look in the right way Cuz I look good and hard 4 the real U I found it and I can definetly feel U [b]CHORUS[/b] How often would U depend on someone 2 give U their all and get the job done From makin love 2 a simple showin up Never give U lies, only give U their trust U see, lookin at me, U wouldn't think that was possible Think b4 U do, decide what is logical I'll only treat U good fi U really deserve it Even if I don't love U, ur heart, I'll never hurt it 1 nite U called me, U told me he started lyin' Trust me, I'm an angel 4 this earth, but I'm not flyin U was cryin' like U lost everything and couldn't find I take away ur pain, calmin thru the phone line Later U went 2 sleep, and woke up wit a morning need U wanted 2 smoke my love like I was bringin' weed I'll relax U, but won't mess U up I'll be ur protection and I'll alwayz stand tuff Sorry if I get out of line, but I'm speakin my mind Bringin u up cuz this is ur time [b]CHORUS[/b] Now it seems that things have switched Becuz U cried over me, they called U a stupid bitch I showed my other side and told what I could do They got the death on me and attempt 2 get U too But God is with U, as well as me They took me too soon but he set my spirit free Ur life has gotten more lonely, when I could've been there And the pain was 2 much 2 bare I showed U all of my wayz, in all of my dayz From he mornings I'd wake up 2 the nights I'd pray Thoughts of U in the head when I'd relax in bed And U'd do the same, only difference is I'm dead Who can save the world from the problems that exist? I write this song and give U one last kiss Pick Up Ur Tears, we got problems 2 fix ____________________________________ A situation a friend of mine was having inspired me 2 write this. Also I listened 2 2pac "Ratha Be Ya Nigga" & Changing Faces "All of My Dayz". When I tried it out up my bro'z house when he had his turntables, I rapped it over Richie Rich's "Do G 's Get 2 Go 2 Heaven". So what do y'all think of this one? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bigted Posted August 1, 2004 Report Share Posted August 1, 2004 Very well done! :thumb: Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
mfuqua23 Posted August 1, 2004 Author Report Share Posted August 1, 2004 Thanks. Appreciate ya feedback. It'z one of those classic youth-grown writtens 2 me. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Prince Posted August 1, 2004 Report Share Posted August 1, 2004 I think it's dope how you finished it off :thumb: Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
mfuqua23 Posted August 2, 2004 Author Report Share Posted August 2, 2004 [quote=Prince,Aug 1 2004, 04:16 PM]I think it's dope how you finished it off :thumb:[/quote] Thanks a lot man! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Admin Hero1 Posted August 2, 2004 Admin Report Share Posted August 2, 2004 nice writin..str8 from ya heart :thumb: Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Da Brakes Posted August 2, 2004 Report Share Posted August 2, 2004 Nicely written!! :thumb: Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
mfuqua23 Posted August 2, 2004 Author Report Share Posted August 2, 2004 Thanks Brakes & Hero1. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Loco Posted August 8, 2004 Report Share Posted August 8, 2004 OOOOOHHHH WEEEEEEEEEE! You did a good job! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
mfuqua23 Posted August 9, 2004 Author Report Share Posted August 9, 2004 Thanks man. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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