Why I Gota Be Listened

[Luigie]

Why I Gotta be Listened - Young Starr

[Chorus]

I got a real good reason to be heard,

I wanna see true love so don't hurt,

I gotta be listened, here goes the why,

Trust me dis ain't another usual lie...

Name changed, style is same,

Lovin the rap game, still sayin bein G is a shame,

Well, here I come reloaded, ready to smash,

To clean up the trash, as fast as flash,

I'm the underground superhero like Geronación,

Do't believe me? Well listen esta canción,

If you think I've changed then is for good,

Cos I don't diss my fellas or try to be the thug in the hood,

Very few people know wat I really can achieve,

Ok he raps and all that but never will be the chief,

Wats wrong witcha?, you're mad at me cos I'm skilled?,

I was born wit dis, didn't need to put in ma name "Lil",

I don't humiliate girls, so they don't love me,

Weird situation, huh? A few ones just hug me,

Watever I do, my music ain't touchin the sky,

And anger grows when I see other touchin it wit lies,

You'd say im sayin the same old thing,

Hold up, now Young Starr is sayin dis thing,

Better lyrics, better everything, still not king but,

Dem you fake MC I will kick yoh butt...

[Chorus]

It is dummies season, so I'm ready to hunt,

My shotgun is the sound everybody wants,

I know you want, to hear Young Starr's gun,

Instead of bullets dis ones shoots funk!,

The private Young Starr representin Hip-Hop,

Givin props to the talented, killin the flop,

Slowly makin his the way thorugh the top,

Many wish I was dead, sorry, can't be stopped,

I could just be like I'm not seein things wrong,

Like many artists who put crap in their songs,

Can't see no more the same light of the pioneers,

Their rhymes shine in the darkness so nobody hears,

Others who are following the right way,

Are being dissed, or being acussed of bein gay,

Is the same old thing, good aint cool,

Many before me said it but seems like still exist dis fools,

Wat we gon do wit em?, change em?,

Very hard, but theres nothin more to do then,

Deal wit em everyday, dats our reality,

Dats how we show God our loyalty...

[Chorus]

I see you still don't get wat is dis all bout,

Let me show u when one more time I open my mouth,

I decided to be more rough, witout cuss,

Just...say things clearly, so u stop dissin us,

Don't need a bullet in my body to be street,

My spit talks by itself that wont feel bad witout dat sh*t,

I know you look at me when im walkin,

And you think dat im a fool cos I ain't all day humpin,

You say sum people can be happy others not,

Dats bull****!, everybody can be happy, work wit all ya got,

Wit dat philosophy, your absolutely lost,

Totally burned like a toast,

Don't be negative, everything got a positive side,

Even death, think dat you mom is at God's side,

So dats bad?...well in the moment yes,

After you wipe ya tears, ya sadness will be less,

But my philosophy says, death got a why,

Our real home is right up there, death lets us fly,

Now I guess you got wat I want, wat I expect,

So move on, no more hate just respect!...

[Don Jiggy]

good rhyme dat time i like to bust one anytime

i kick da sickness wit da quickness leave u puckered like lime

or well i mean well but my ears swell when i hear garbage rhymes from well...

u kno da word

and its upsurd the crowd aint kick it to da curb

i cant stand it surprised nobody banned it

kickflip i jus cant land it

but i understand why my feet aint comin up high

like da fools at school think drugs is da tool

im on my skateboard like ooooo

my bad got sidetracked let me get back to da soundtrak......

[Turntable]

I like it man!

[viber_91]

Nice! Like it!

[Luigie]

thanks y'all

[BigWillieFan01]

Very good rhymes. I like them.

[mfuqua23]

It's fairly good. I think the chorus could've been better written considerin' what you talked about in your verses. I liked your 2nd verse the best. Nice job Luigie.

[Luigie]

Thanks FuQ

i will work in a better chorus definetly :2thumbs: