markwinfield1 Posted July 11, 2006 Report Share Posted July 11, 2006 It's gameover/Not takevover/Pop off rhymes like i pop open a soda/Check my quota/I'm flooden like noah/ I devour the garbage/These poets is sour/Welcome to the 360/Dudes barely eatin/Welcome to 1950/And welcome back to the 360/I pick em nifty/Welcome to 1945/The nazi's killing them swiftly/Life can be ****ty/Call me me the bluedevil/Just know i'll come for you soon/So rename me the rebel/I settle for nothing/I guess this is another Great Depession/Times are tough/I tell the kids they don't need to see this/Close the blinds/I tell the internet thugs/Whats yours is mines/Call me the reeper/I contact b4 i come on your beeper/My work is dangerous/so i wear steel toed boots/ I hope this is any good! P.S. don't take this rhymes seriously... Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Don Jiggy Posted July 11, 2006 Report Share Posted July 11, 2006 It's gameover/Not takevover/Pop off rhymes like i pop open a soda/Check my quota/I'm flooden like noah/ I devour the garbage/These poets is sour/Welcome to the 360/Dudes barely eatin/Welcome to 1950/And welcome back to the 360/I pick em nifty/Welcome to 1945/The nazi's killing them swiftly/Life can be ****ty/Call me me the bluedevil/Just know i'll come for you soon/So rename me the rebel/I settle for nothing/I guess this is another Great Depession/Times are tough/I tell the kids they don't need to see this/Close the blinds/I tell the internet thugs/Whats yours is mines/Call me the reeper/I contact b4 i come on your beeper/My work is dangerous/so i wear steel toed boots/ I hope this is any good! P.S. don't take this rhymes seriously... u know what,u got da rhyme part down, but anyone can do that, what u need to do is actually talk about somethin, and dont worry about punch lines so much jus let em flo until u dont even kno its a punch line Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
J-o-e Posted July 11, 2006 Report Share Posted July 11, 2006 I'm egotistical everytime that I'm dissing U Jus like Ur girls wince when they b kissin U Let me ask mark? Do u go and smoke drugs If so then why the hell call us internet thugs I'll hit you so hard you'll land in next week Keep Ur mouth shut and listen when I speak Ur Flow's off point man u just so damn lazy U can't phaze me cause i'm just so crazy U pop shít just like opening a can of soda? This dude sounds a cross of darth vadar n yoda U need help but before u leave, why u grieve Rap's cruel so never leave Ur rhyme on the sleeve..what No offence jus a rhyme Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
markwinfield1 Posted July 11, 2006 Author Report Share Posted July 11, 2006 Yeah i kinda got my style from lloyd banks/The Game...Just needed to say that!I'll respond once i get a good freestyle ready j-o-e! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
J-o-e Posted July 11, 2006 Report Share Posted July 11, 2006 U mean once u wrote something good? :lolsign: homie, a freestyle or keystyle here is when u think of it at the top of ur head...not think of it for a month and get bk 2 me...but tho its cool...i'll let u think :lolsign: it's all good Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
markwinfield1 Posted July 12, 2006 Author Report Share Posted July 12, 2006 I know!But i'm that bad... Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
J-o-e Posted July 12, 2006 Report Share Posted July 12, 2006 Nah u aint bad...ur just new thats all...i was worse when i started believe...keep it up n keep it real...i only diss u cause the way i learnt was against people better than me.... Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mike Posted July 14, 2006 Report Share Posted July 14, 2006 (edited) you'll get better over time, joes right.. save your original verses and stuff. i come back to my old old threads and they're horriblle. now i think im pretty good. so just write and put your heart into it and you'll be better in no time EDIT: i forgot about what joe said about the battles...thats so true, i got most of my experiance from a long ass battle thread.. it was like 30 pages long and i just kept on writing verse after verse after verse and thats how i got a lot of practice. Edited July 14, 2006 by Concept Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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