Luigie Posted August 1, 2006 Report Share Posted August 1, 2006 For the Suckas - Young Starr [Verse] Check this intro cause you wont see another, Me and a mic doin my thing like no other, This is for let ya know im comin to your town, Keeping underground, erradicatin awful sounds, You know what I mean, that sound, yeah, fake mc’s, You heard bout it from Da Brakes, now from me, Don't take it so personal man, calm down, I don't hate the player, I hate hows the game now, You're Lost, I'm found, my **** blow up, im royalty, Not phenomenal, just know well whats loyalty, To the hip-hop, to our hip-hop, simple like that, So what the hell you waitin to stop that?, Lets delete clowns from the map, doin rap, Blowin up, glowin up, just doin it to go up, Get better song by song, line by line, Decent concerts, mixtapes, givin a good concept to the rhyme, Cause everybody in the very inside got sumthin good, And im workin to take it out, and show all these dudes, No matter if you're workin at the mall, If youre playin b-ball not being tall, Wat really matters, is your effort, Follow me, now that gotta be worth, At least im not ashamed of wat i did... Like...you know that kid... I'd aprecciate feedback Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
sonic1988 Posted August 1, 2006 Report Share Posted August 1, 2006 that was mad cool man, the only thing is that you pause a couple times which kinda messes up the flow. the pauses at the end are cool, but the other pauses kinda mess up the flow. Other than that, that was really cool. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Luigie Posted August 1, 2006 Author Report Share Posted August 1, 2006 Thanks, these are one of my first audio tries, i'll keep wat u say in mind, thanks again to stop by and comment :2thumbs: anyone else? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Turntable Posted August 2, 2006 Report Share Posted August 2, 2006 It was cool. Your flow was on point, so where you lyrics. But I think that you maybe shoud put a lil more energy in it. You sound kinda to relaxed to me. Thats just me tho. Keep it up. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Luigie Posted August 2, 2006 Author Report Share Posted August 2, 2006 its my mic, when i put my voice louder, sounds distorsioned, thanks for comment it Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Da Brakes Posted August 2, 2006 Report Share Posted August 2, 2006 It was cool. Your flow was on point, so where you lyrics. But I think that you maybe shoud put a lil more energy in it. You sound kinda to relaxed to me. Thats just me tho. Keep it up. I agree with turntable on this! Whats your setup like? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Luigie Posted August 2, 2006 Author Report Share Posted August 2, 2006 is setup means the software i use, then i use Virtual DJ Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Da Brakes Posted August 2, 2006 Report Share Posted August 2, 2006 Sorry dude I meant equipment and how its all connected! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Luigie Posted August 2, 2006 Author Report Share Posted August 2, 2006 Sorry dude I meant equipment and how its all connected! wel really i dont got a decent equipment...uhm..lets see, my headphones set, a bunch of downloaded beats, thas all :) Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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