Turntable Posted August 3, 2006 Report Share Posted August 3, 2006 (edited) Hey Guys. I wrote this during the last week. I dont have a hook yet, caus I find that hard to do. Its kinda personal. It trys to explain me a lil I think. I just stardet writing with no real thoughts behind it, and this is how it endet up. I`d love to hear what ya`ll think. Thanks! P.S.: I got those 2 (?) in it caus I`m not shure about those words. I`m chilling in my room, listening to Pun Thinking to myself, its true, the good die young Nice Guys finish last, thats what I`ve been told So whats the use of my hart of gold If it wont take me further, than the very last spot? I dont know man, I could just dumb down Get shady in this ****, just to snatch the crown But something inside keeps telling me not to So truggling with this thoughts, I`m chasing my dreams The game wont change me, wherever it takes me From Amsterdam, till back home where my hart is I`ve seen allot, thougt about it too and I learned that whatever you do, It`s allways gonna come back to you Sometimes good & sometimes bad But, and thats for shure, you`ll learn from those facts If you feel what I say, homie please holla back And we gonna show the world, its our time to clap Haters wanna smash me, diss and herrass(?) me But I keep going my way, doing what I want Caus I`ve been told, no one can judge me but God Let God deal with the things they do Thats what Wil Smith told, and thats what I`ll do The keep fronting at my lifestyle, while My mother keeps crying, my sister keeps dieing(?).. ..inside of her, living this temporry nightmare The dark times are coming to an end, thats what I realise No mather how deep the wounds are, I`m gonna get my shyne So I just keep my head up, doing what I love A thing called Hip Hop, something ya`ll heard of Its the voice of the youth, aint no one stopping this & I just wanna thank God, for giving me this gift And the artists I love, inspiring Mc`s Talking about Cool J, Joey Crack, Pun, Ghostface an his clique Till The Dark Man X, Ja, Beasties and The Freshest Prince & allot more artists, Yo It`s been quit a way But those are some guys, that made me what I am today I`m just a young guy, fighting for my dreams And for a nice guy like me, it`s harder than it seems But dont get this wrong, I aint easy to hunt Caus if you use my name, in a insulting way, Homie, damn right its going down If you cross the line, for shure I`m gonna hurt you So let this be a warning, caus I dont wanna start **** I`m walking my way, jus dont try to stop me Wont stop, cant stop, thats what they say And finnaly I get why they`r feeling that way It`s great a feeling, no man can describe it Its going through your hart, your flesh and your blood You keep having it in mind, just like your biggest love Dont fight the feeling, just go with the flow Caus you know you need it, you cant stop now With that in mind, I keep fighting for my dreams Doing it the nice way, doing it my way And if I finish last, at least I can say I did it with love, stayed real till today. Edited August 3, 2006 by Turntable Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
J-o-e Posted August 3, 2006 Report Share Posted August 3, 2006 that's really decent man...a couple of things i pointed out to u on msn but thats it...keep up the good work Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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