Members Da Fresh Prince Posted August 14, 2006 Members Report Share Posted August 14, 2006 first off id like to thank my brotha trey 4 helpin me a bit wit dis song. he like ma producer/help writier, lol. hope ya like it! enjoy! Lil Smoker - "My Time (Intro)" (VERSE ONE) SMOKER! yo thugs n gangstas, put away yo swordz coz some good cds are headin in storez my time to spit this rhyme your time to go kick the time lil smoker smokin his way to fame n on his way repairin the game ive been rappin sice i was 9 years old y u poppin that thing like u been told? my freestyle is gonna kill ya n flip ya Fast as a cheeta, slick like a cobra i aint smokin weed or pockets full of cash i write rhymes that work, not full o trash blasted u freakin folks outta tha water i take an ol beat, and make it hotter Keeping my eyez on the prize It don't matter the size im the hustler of this street dis game is crazy, jus take a seat sick n tired of yall talkin crap coz this marks the rebirth of rap (CHORUS) Yall know this is my time (my time) Dont mess, dis is my rhyme (my rhyme) Whatever I do, its my crime (my crime) Y u wanna mess wit my dime? (my dime) (repeat twice then fade..) Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Luigie Posted August 14, 2006 Report Share Posted August 14, 2006 i liked the 2 first lines Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Pakalicous Posted August 14, 2006 Report Share Posted August 14, 2006 Yo how old are you man? And how old is your bro? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
J-o-e Posted August 14, 2006 Report Share Posted August 14, 2006 And when was u 9? 2 years ago? lol sorry man, U could use more complex rhymes to start a album off...make people think that ur worth listening to but keep it up man, you'll get there someday. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Luigie Posted August 17, 2006 Report Share Posted August 17, 2006 make real stuff, man I doubt you'll be kickin gangstas or thugs butts :shake: Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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